|Reviews for Chronicles Of Camelot|
| CaBuckeye chapter 4 . 8/18/2014
Well...if balance must be maintained-then it has to be MALFOY! [thus spake the hat]
| spankiekitlo chapter 38 . 8/18/2014
Hello just read this book and found it very hard to put down I think ur writing is fantastic and I will have to read some more of ur books. I have been reading harry potter fanfiction for 7 years now and this would have to be in the top 20 best fanfiction I have ever had the pleasure of reading.
Please keep writing for u have a gift for it and I look forward to seeing some more in the future.
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Spankiekitlo A.K.A daniel williams.
| darkpothead chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
This was a great story, but I was disappointed at the end. Why wouldn't they just use Dumbledore's or Fudge's life force to save Harry? Fudge was executed at the end anyway, and Dumbledore was sentenced to life in prison and was responsible for Harry nearly dying. It would have made a lot more sense, especially since Harry didn't want anyone to sacrifice themselves for him, let alone his mother. It was never said that the person who died had to be willing, all it said was that Harry had to choose.
| Mohammad.Alzo chapter 14 . 8/7/2014
Ridiculous, does Dumbledore look like a mentally challenged 5 year old? "Not signed by the Dursleys!" wtf? That's not only childish, can easily be predicted to be unsuccessful AND would likely make Harry hate dumbledore even more... No intelligent 130 year old man would be so pathetic as to use such methods of manipulation.
He would be subtle, seem to help Harry, support him when he tries to get emancipated and what not, gain his trust only to stab him in the back at the most dire moment. Do you not understand manipulation?
This "bashing" has taken away any enjoyment I get from this story, I apologize but I do not think I can complete it.
| Angel of Hell99 chapter 38 . 8/3/2014
This is a great story. I enjoyed reading it.
| SuperVegitoFAN chapter 31 . 8/3/2014
im betting that the reason gabby can be that is because harry is the archknight... similar to how minerva couldnt be a teacher and head of house while being headmistress.
| SuperVegitoFAN chapter 7 . 8/2/2014
The part about riddle is extremely confusing but that he isnt really bad, but dumbledore turned him bad is something new
first story ive really read with a good riddle...
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/23/2014
Did you name Hermione's parents after the actors from the movie, because if so, that's smart of you
| daithi4377 chapter 38 . 7/11/2014
Awesome story. Hard to believe the patience that Harry had to constantly stopping in just short of killing Ron...first of even second time but by the attempted rape he would have been dead if it had been me. The acceptance of Tom was interesting as well though I'm pretty sure Lily was having second thought. I would have liked to have seen a bit more of tbe additional pairing but no sequel so will have to settle for my imagination lol. Superb story as always.
| daithi4377 chapter 37 . 7/11/2014
I would have switched the punishments and had Albus go through the veil instead of Fudge. I think the hardest hit would be Severus he doesn't have the option of seeing Lily with a few turns of a stone so he lost her twice. I should have caught on to Draco with the about face and seeing with with Gabby at the ball. That and just the irony of him inheriting the powers of a Holy Knight from a so called Mudblood lol.
| daithi4377 chapter 36 . 7/11/2014
But will the true killer of Ron be revealed or will Harry yet again be blamed. I like the twists on the graveyard scene. It's going to really put the old goats knickers in a twist when he sees what Harry has done lol.
| daithi4377 chapter 35 . 7/11/2014
Hmm if the second task was still the underwater one wouldnt the merpeople be the ones to back out rather than the goblins. As to the mystery person who of course would fight Harry I guess it would be either Tom or Dumbledore. Unless they make Hermoine fight the mystery guess to kill her.
No comments on the crown I'm surprised that it would go unnoticed.
| daithi4377 chapter 34 . 7/11/2014
What did Dumbledore or Ron cast on the dragon to cause it to attack Hermoine?
| daithi4377 chapter 33 . 7/11/2014
LOL the school turns against them...really is that supposed to worry the Knights...
| daithi4377 chapter 32 . 7/11/2014
He is a collector of titles and powers and only fourteen...why does anyone really think they can go up against him and actually win.