Reviews for Chronicles Of Camelot
ladysavay chapter 8 . 9/29/2011
Okay, I get that you want to build on the drama and suspense, but you are now placing Sirius in the catagory of seriously stupid. He's been with them for months and even gone through guard dog training and in all that time hasn't found a spare moment to even once transform to Sirius and write a letter to explain what really happened or even let Harry know who really betrayed his parents?

Big, frigging, plot hole which makes him seem both deranged and dumb as dirt, not to mention will leave them all very suspicous of his motives when he is discovered to have been there all along.


JBird7986 chapter 8 . 9/29/2011
Very cool story thus far. I am confused about one thing though...Harry and Hermione bonded together, each gaining the other's abilities according to the story. Therefore, can't Harry breathe underwater as well, and can't Hermione use his abilities with fire and thunder, etc.?
god of all chapter 8 . 9/29/2011
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
Aealket chapter 8 . 9/29/2011

Nice update, I suspect nothing will teach Dumbles a lesson. I mean it is just within he realm of possibilities that red-heads can learn, but Bumblebees? Never, they have too little brain...

So Amelia isn't convinced of Sirius' guilt? Hmmm... Oh and You go Amelia.

Interesting, is Dumbles a vampire that needs to be invited into a house?

Can I hope we will get to see Luna again since we are heading back to Hogwarts. I think she needs a bit to do...

harmonyforever12 chapter 3 . 9/26/2011
Good chapter, but I have a question : How can some of the wounds be new, if they were just coming home from Hoggywarts? Just wondering. Other than that, 10/10. Bravo!
Princess Silverstar chapter 7 . 9/23/2011
a very refreshing insight to the return of Voldermort, i mean, Tom Riddle. cant wait to read more
Zamia chapter 7 . 9/22/2011
Like the way the order members are intel gathering for Harry. Hopefully Nev & Harry get together soon and work out who they are. If Harry can control Tom that would mean Dumbles is now his greatest enemy. Good read. Cheers.

josh148513 chapter 7 . 9/21/2011
Update soon
Airlady chapter 7 . 9/21/2011
That was a very good scene with Neville.

Good to see Harry and Hermione getting some useful information.
LadyPhoenix731 chapter 7 . 9/21/2011
a not-so-evil tom, huh? this could be interesting.
hogwart lady chapter 7 . 9/21/2011
holy moley this so great i like this alot i hope to read all u r stories
DarkHeart81 chapter 7 . 9/21/2011
Good chapter.
Penny is wise chapter 7 . 9/21/2011
Awesome chapter.
hpnut1 chapter 7 . 9/21/2011
Great job, loved it
Cassandra30 chapter 7 . 9/21/2011
Neville should be given Terra as his element. He after all is the Herbology prodigy. Wonderful idea. Very creative story.
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