Reviews for Cold Case Love
Roast Han chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
What a fabulous little story :3 I don't even watch this show but I found it very easy to get in to and enjoy. Slightly cheeky but in a sort of Mills and Boon romantic, passionate style. Much enjoyed, well done :D x
Abby-Kate chapter 7 . 10/1/2012
LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE!

Just a couple of things that jumped out; TAXI doesn't need to be capitalized, and in the paragraph where they're in the taxi you put other's- it should've been others'. :) But your grammar really is improving... Careful, you'll soon put me out of a job ;)

I love how you incorporated my suggestion about the records being connected to Shannon's, but I wasn't credited *cries* ;) I love Ruby Valenti (don't think I haven't noticed that she looks like you with shorter hair!) but I'd like to see some more Gibbs & Ruby in the present, as well as Ruby's relationships with the team.. Maybe you could keep flicking between the past & present?

I adore Cold Case Love, and I ALWAYS say this I know, but UPDATE SOON! 3

Love,
Katie AKA soon-to-be unemployed grammar policewoman ;)
AhrenFox chapter 6 . 9/12/2012
Well, a Gibbs love story err more of a lustful Gibbs story. Wow very heated last couple of chapters especially the last one, gonna rename this one "Fifty Shades of Gibbs", lol. Really looking forward to see what this little minx has in store for Gibbs also the case, yes beyond all that heated passion I remember that there is a case to be solved, I just hope Gibbs doesn't loose focus with Ruby, or could she be a unwilling or possibly willing pawn in this double homicide. Must be patient and see how this will all pan out. As usual another excellent read. Must remember to gift the author a bottle of "Fantasque" if ever I make it to a book signing.
Pen chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
Fantastic! You are a super talented fan fic writer, can't wait to read more :)
Kate Scuito chapter 6 . 4/26/2012
For a reader who hates Gibbs/OC *and spent ten minutes working up the courage to read this fanfic, honestly!) this isn't too bad; quite original actually! :P

I'd suggest putting the month & year (possibly also location if we're talking different cities / states) at the top of the chapter or every time the time and/or location changes. It's helpful and avoids confusion :)

I think I mentioned this in another fic already; it might be a good idea to have less uber-long sentences. I read the fics aloud in my head and when there isn't a full stop, I'm literally reading ... and ... and ... and ... and by the time the sentence ends I've forgotten the beginning and have to reread :(

But honestly, this is actually... *cringe* good.

Tweet me when you update, BFF dearest ;)

Love from the blonde Abby xxx (you're the brunette Abby obviously!)
NCISMASH4ever chapter 6 . 4/17/2012
I like Ruby, she truly cares about Gibbs. I'm a MAJOR Gabby shipper, but this is good too. As long as the woman is sweet to Gibbs, there's no Abby bashing, and the smut is of the swwet smut kind, I'm happy. I love when Gibbs gets protective, even in bed! lol! Seriously, I do. Great story, continue!
Alan J. Watkins chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
Fantastic work Rosie :) Fits in very well with NCIS and Gibbs character especially :) Fantastic work and keep going :)
Flame177123 chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
Ooooo very good. Mysterious. I like it. :)
Anonymous Person Man Chaos chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
Even after reading just the first paragraph, I am totally hooked, the way you describe every little detail makes my head almost literally explode with way you have portrayed Gibbs is probably how he would act in this situation! (Rule #51, classic!)Not much else to say, except, amazing in every way!
Saneeta chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
Great Story!

Well written, draws you straight in...

Keep it up! :)
Bailey gibb-slap Newrick chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
I love this story it's ace how you came up with it I don't now but don't stop writing it's an addictive read
KittiRain chapter 6 . 11/18/2011
Howdee!

Normally I'm not a huge fan of stories with OC's in ;;;

But I actually really enjoyed this one! Can't wait for more!
Sweet-Melodee chapter 6 . 10/14/2011
i just started to read this story and i love it already.

update soon
H.I. Fanfiction chapter 6 . 10/5/2011
Yes! bring on the gibbs/ruby love! great chapter too btw! hugs... - E. :-]
bbfan chapter 6 . 10/5/2011
Um... yeah... M rating would be nice! Enjoying the story so far!
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