Reviews for Temperamental
Appointment chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
Brilliant writing, really! I think you've captured the scene perfectly, and I love the way you formed the story. It works out nicely, and I liked it a lot! It's quite beautiful, really.

Your Score :

Spelling & Grammar - 8/10.

Characterization - 10/10.

Use of Topic - 8/8.

Flow - 5/5.

Believability - 2/3.

So that's 33/36, good job!
TheAlieVee chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
Wow... I'm a girl and I was completely entranced by her rage haha. It is rather silly that she gets worked up over a single slip but that she recognizes it is what makes this a great story. The ending is so adorably romantic )

- Alie V