Reviews for Fair Play
NamiMakimono chapter 1 . 6/23/2014

*shakes head*

I've got several stashes of jellybeans hidden all around my room
Akiyuzu-chan chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
Pure awesomeness. :D
Wrath4life chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
Damn his dream was so real but now I wonder, what happens in the next sequel of this story. : )

Thanks for writing this love GrimIchi stories that deals with them in high school love. : D
puppyfacetwo chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
Ok so, I totally forgot this said 'oneshot' until I hit the back button and saw it in with the description... I kinda feel like a moron... but oh well... ;D
puppyfacetwo chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
Chocolate fuels the imagination. I've been making chocolate chip cookies like crazy, so I kinda know the feeling. :3

I so thought what was goin' on in the storage room was for realz. They were so close in that dream of his too. Ah well, there's always time for the real thing later right? I hope so anyways. :)
Alt3etf chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
a duck with a box :') brilliant
Nickaustin90 chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
You are so cruel. TT
My secret love chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
Oh ur soooo lucky I wish we had chochlate in the house! love ur story so far! XD
Tsukasa.n.Serena.rule chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
Lol that was so awesome! Very well written and just what i needed today. I am stuck in a van driving home through hurricane irene so yea for good fics!

Loreto W chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
That was a wonderful story! I really really liked a lot! But I'm so sad that you ruined it with that damn dream! It would have been perfect if Grimmjow wouldn't have been daydreaming T_T awwwwwww you are such a good writer! You had wonderful descriptions and your narration was excelent! I enjoyed greatly the story! And I loved how you kept the personality of the characters! But if only it would have had a happy ending! You should write a sequel! T_T IT's not fair!
Tainted Rhapsody chapter 1 . 8/25/2011

Secondly; no, you can NEVER have enough chocolate. Chocolate is goooood... XD Yeah, you're not insane; I'm obsessed with it too~.

...but I shouldn't really be one to ask on those sort of matters, huh...XP (ooh...spaaaarkly...)

Thirdly; that was de~lish. I love how you portrayed Grimm in this chappy; especially when he kicked the stool out of under Ichi's feet just so he could cop a feel . Mischievous and in love, but still subtle in his actions.

The only thing I can say; why-oh-WHY didn't you let them go all the waaayyy? I was all set up with a box of tissues and everything, too... *sniff* (well, now I'm using them for a different reason)

Other than that, excellently written, strong storyline and relationship development (as per usual), and... NO SMUTTTT *breaks down into tears*

...Ok, I'm over it. But seriously.

Oh, and yeah, are you going to continue this? Because that ending just REEKED of lemony possibilities. XD Ah, the cogs in my head are a-whirring~!

Now that you're finally back (emphasis on FINALLY; I've been waiting forever), I will be looking forward to more wonderful ficcies~.

~Tainted Rhapsody~ Lamenting the loss of a wonderful Lemon opportunity...
XxDamned ForeverXx chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
That was sexxxy and way funny XD good to have you back, hun, missed ya!
ichibanseiken chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
Wow this was an absolutely wonderful, sweet story! Loving it, faving it. The misunderstanding between the two of them regarding the fights and how Grimmjow doesn't hit Ichigo is so precious and sweet - and yeah, what a daydream! As I read it I thought, wow, this would make a great multi-chapter...

Please don't tell me this is a one-shot. I love the characterization, the motivations, all of that. What a treat.
JoanIncarnate chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
cute. :)

and nope, nothing wrong with chocolate obsession. it happens to everyone.
meka18 chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
i like this a lot