Reviews for The Scarbrows |
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![]() ![]() this has been a good story-i hope u do a squeal. |
![]() ![]() This is good, it's just it's all happening really fast, you know? Usually after someone is raped they are having a little harder time then Leah is having, is she in shock? |
![]() ![]() I really like this story, I'm so glad Rob found the twins, I can't wait to until they tell the peter and sophie,anxiously waiting for the next chapter Sarah) |
![]() ![]() this story is so good, I had a feeling Rob was their brother when he said he was adopted,I'm so glad Ivy is home and told her parents what's been bothering her,I can't wait for the next part Sarah) |
![]() ![]() I really like this story a lot at first when i read that u had leah kidnapped i was like ooo god now she's gonna make it dumb. But i'm sorry for thinking that cause i really like how u twisted things and actually have a reason for them to be kidnapped it's pretty cool. I also thought that the scene with peter and ivy was cute u could have made it a little longer but it was still cute. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Apple Strudel? Come on, that's cheesy. Anyhoo, thanks for updating...I'll keep reading... |
![]() ![]() whoa! who's got a gun on Leah? what's next? great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AAHHH! You can't just leave us hanging like that! Please, please update soon! I can't wait to find out how this story ends! |
![]() ![]() this is good, a little cheesy though. Are you almost done with this story? It would be an awsome twist if Ivy went home and then something bad happend to her. But its your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks so much for the update. I love this story! I can't wait to find out who kidnapped Leah and Ivy. Please write more soon! |
![]() ![]() you wrote the conversation between peter and ivy perfectly. i can't wait to see what you have in store for leah and rob. great work and merry christmas! |
![]() ![]() great chapter! love that rob is more a part of the story now. so what's next? :-) |
![]() ![]() this is really an excellent story,Leah sure got Ivy in trouble this time, can't wait to see if leah finds her birth parents names, I can't wait for the next part Sarah) |
![]() ![]() this is a great story. i like the direction you're headed. i'd like to see more involvement from rob since he's a new character but he has yet to do much. just a thought. keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! Keep up the great work! I can't wait to see what happens next! |