Reviews for Don't tell mum
Forever Cullen chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
I loved it. Poor Arthur ! can't wait to see what happens next.
superbored85 chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
Interesting start but a little awkward to read.

"I thought you was doing." - ?

At first they did nothing but insult each other, but as time went on, insults had less heat behind them, as though they weren't bothered anymore, friendship took over which after getting drunk one night and Arthur and Merlin waking up naked in the same bed with Arthur still buried in Merlin from the night before they were now boyfriends.

- I think this could have been split up a little more by ending at 'took over'. I would have removed the 'which' and started 'after' as the beginning of a new sentence. The latter part may have a better alternative to get across the point.
Chrystel Malfoy-Potter chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
Cute and funny. Can't wait to see merlin's mom's reaction.
HELEN chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
What will Hunith say to Merlin? And what will Uther say to Arthur?. Its going to be worth the wait too find out.
vivafabrique chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
this is funny

keep it going
TidusGT chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
cool chapter! please update soon!
Canadian-23 chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
Hey amazing! :)

Aswome idea! I can't wait to see the chapter two! :) I laugh so loud at the Gawain part and I love protective and possessive Arthur! :) :) love this idea and you are amazing! :) :) :)
Cathcer1984 chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
*giggles* brilliant!
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