|Reviews for The White Chrysanthemum|
| Unsatisfied-Gluttony chapter 6 . 8/22/2012
Haha Thanks for this good story_
| bells-mannequin chapter 6 . 8/18/2012
I just wish this would be canon!Kyouko :D
| phxjkr88 chapter 6 . 8/8/2012
Great Story! It was an easy read and was easy to picture in my head.
Thank you for writing such a great story.
| belfranieXS chapter 5 . 7/31/2012
that is damn hell cute! bahahaha! Its nice that kyoko has the same effect tsuna has xD
this story is great!
| serp-derp chapter 6 . 6/13/2012
x3 KYAYYAA! xanxus was adorable in this one x33
| whereami2012 chapter 6 . 3/17/2012
Ah, this was a delight to read. Yes, I can see it now. Kyoko managing to tame the Varia to the point where they are nothing but kittens. It was such a humorous read that I felt refreshed doing so. Ah, how in character it all seemed, and it felt as real as ever. Who knew that Xanxus was into classical music though?
| JC-zala chapter 6 . 12/19/2011
I just got the image of Xanxus and Kyoko being penpals...That would worry Tsuna to no end. Kyoko's so sweet. The gift was just perfect for Xanxus.
I really enjoyed this story all in all. The touching moments between Varia and Kyoko were written well. I love the humor thrown in here and there, and of course you've definitely deserve credit for making this.
| JC-zala chapter 5 . 12/19/2011
And Xanxus turns out to be a really decent cook! Hooray! Oh, gosh, that was just precious. To think Xanxus would go out of his way to make soup for Kyoko-chan. That girl really tamed Varia and she's being so cute to them.
| JC-zala chapter 4 . 12/19/2011
A girl's charms can be a lethal weapon. Kyoko is certainly making use of that, though unconsciously doing it. She's very perceptive too in giving insights about the Varia members. Goes to show that you can't underestimate a woman. I agree with Haru's words completely. The boys do worry a lot and they have no idea the effect Kyoko has over the Varia members. Quite interesting and amazing at the same time.
And my gosh! I was like WTF? Xanxus...in the KITCHEN...CoOKinGGG! LOL... _
| JC-zala chapter 3 . 12/19/2011
Poor Lussuria...Being a mommy is tough. But I really do like his flashy personality. It perks up the dark mood at times.
Levi's sweet in his own way. He's always trying his best to please Xanxus. He thinks that he's under appreciated but Kyoko-chan made him think otherwise.
Oh, gosh! That scene with Bel and Fran was my favorite. Bel and Fran cracked me up, and I love how Kyoko can be so open to them. The two were certainly surprised. Of course, I love the moment wherein Bel placed a hand over Kyoko's temple. The Prince is Concerned!
So cute of Kyoko-chan. She's like a sun to each member of the Varia.
Poor Tsuna-kun...He's so worried for his girl.
| JC-zala chapter 2 . 12/19/2011
Honestly, I don't know how, but you write an impressive story. I'd rather consider Kyoko as a very unique Snow White for the matter, with dwarves who are epic in fighting but almost clueless in handling a pretty, delicate flower like Kyoko. Xanxus is man enough not to throw Kyoko out, which I respect, and I like how you made Squalo do the "eh" talk with Tsuna.
Of course, Tsuna is being Tsuna as usual. He's really worried sick for his girl. Hehe.
Good job again.
| JC-zala chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
It's only the first chapter and I've really enjoyed it. I love the way you portrayed Kyoko here. She came off as an independent and strong-willed woman. It's amazing that she's able to walk up to the Varia guy and not be scared to death.
The guys are pretty funny in a way. It's interesting that Kyoko, a woman, is making them nervous. Even Xanxus is clueless. Lol...
Great job in writing this. I'm gonna read more!
| Readers-Section chapter 6 . 11/21/2011
Goodness, this was splendid. Literally, from the character choice (Kyoko is SEVERELY underappreciated and requires a lot more attention), to the perfectly chosen words, the easily-flowing writing, the comedic value (well-written humor involving the Varia is always a plus), the subtle character growth and development...all of it was wonderful.
I loved Kyoko in this story, she fitted what I also believe she would be like ince she was actually part of the Vongola. The Varia were superbly written, not an easy task at all. I especially have to mention Squalo and Lussuria, they were FANTASTIC and so, SO funny, yet strangely very IC. Lovely read.
| Dream Charmer chapter 6 . 10/19/2011
I've been away from the site for quite some time, so this comes pretty late, but I still want to say - Tsuna sending Xanxus a box of tequila is hilarious))
And yup, I like that Kyoko is not soppy (because soppy is boring), but how you achieved it without making her a fighter. I can't imagine Kyoko really using a weapon, but it's so nice to see her being useful.
| midnight.wolf62 chapter 6 . 9/21/2011
Such a nice ending. :)
I really enjoyed the story - thanks for sharing it!