Reviews for Returning more than the relic
SleepiPanda chapter 10 . 6/22/2014
This is really interesting.
I'm surprised the Aroshok let her go.. I wonder what will happen..
NeverXUnderstoodXIt chapter 10 . 9/8/2013
Please come back to this story and update it!
Rya B chapter 10 . 6/28/2013
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH! I love this story so muuuuuuuch and you havent updated in forever :'( im seriously gonna have a break down! You've managed something that i thought no one would actually mange to do AND you did it well! I mean she just fits in so perfectly it feels like every time i play the game I keep missing her mission to gain her as a companion lol its driving me mad XD please update I'll love you forever! Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
DistortedBeauty chapter 10 . 12/26/2012
Hello. I really like your story, I have not read any story like this. I really like your OC Ocheeva, she is curious and honorable and has a strong relationship with the Arishock I feel like the relationship you have created for both of them is believable.I guess that is what makes this story fascinating. Enjoy reading OC stories because it really brings out the imagination and creativity of the author. I will wait patiently for your next update. :)
m chapter 9 . 4/18/2012
fallenfaeangel chapter 8 . 11/14/2011
Awesome chapter! I think the Ocheeva and Arishok are great together. I would love to read more about there interesting relationship and the dynamics of it. Thank you for such a delightful read.
tmjay10 chapter 8 . 11/10/2011
oOoooOoOooooOOOOOoo that was forbidden


update quick
fallenfaeangel chapter 7 . 11/5/2011
I really like this story and Ocheeva. I loved the bits between her and the Arishok as well. A truely lovely story that I hope to read more of in the future. Well done all around, thanks for a delightful read.
melgonzo chapter 6 . 10/13/2011
Loved it! I understand about the DLC LOL. I have play through on it four times already. They did a great job with it! This last chapter was great! Looking forward to more!
tmjay10 chapter 6 . 10/11/2011
yes inspiration

and awwhh i love their relationship
DeliverAntz chapter 5 . 10/9/2011
im liking dis, im liking dis verrry much. i havent seen anything quite like this in the DA pages before, a human slave(arishok fangirl) to the qunari, and your artwork seems to fit her style really well. i thought at first that she would have a greyish skin tone like sten, but then people might think she was a proper female qunari, so i think you pulled it off really, really well. and who doesnt love a little bit of anders hatin'. all in all, very well done! looking forward to the next update.
Skeleton.Dreams chapter 5 . 10/5/2011
really hope you continue this!
Lady Epicness chapter 5 . 9/18/2011
Good story, but one thing makes me get all twitchy... You spelt "Hawk" wrong. It has an E at the end, Hawke. Other than that, it's a pretty decent story:)
Ifalna chapter 3 . 8/31/2011
Excellent so far, keep up the good work!
Judy chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
Interesting and very well done!