|Reviews for Along Came A Symbiote|
| edwardelric16 chapter 13 . 2/26
Please return to writing my friend. Still one of my favorite stories to read! Or re-read in this case
| Apedreitor chapter 14 . 2/6
damn this is like the fith or sixth time im re reading this fic i always loved it a shame you not are continuing it its an amazing work and hope that you in the close future give it a try again because of all the fics of naruto having the venom symbiot this is the best one by miles one thing i would love its to see a chapter from the simbiote point of view or at least know what he thinks of the whole situation with his host
anyway this fic is an amazing work
| Mighty Pen 20 chapter 14 . 11/24/2014
The pros: Interesting story and plot. This is actually the first ' Naruto with a symbiote ' fic that i have read, so it was pretty engaging. You have set up the characterizations of the protagonists nicely, while you have assigned a creepiness factor to Naruto that makes him unique.
The cons: there are a lot of mistakes; not so much grammar or spelling ones, but rather wrong word usage in most cases. This might be a bit offputting, depending on each individual reader.
Nonetheless, the story in total was quite enjoyable. Good job.
| KyoudaiDoushi chapter 8 . 10/24/2014
You know, that's one thing I've never really been able to figure out about that arc in canon. I mean, I understand that Tsunade didn't KNOW Sasuke had met up with four (five if you could Kimimaro) Jounin-level nin, but COME ON. If you had a Shinobi go rogue, WHY the Hell would you send a group of fresh Genin after him? Especially since it was already established that he was STRONGER than all of them. I know they needed an excuse to make Naruto and Sasuke fight and have that dramatic arc ending and all, but REALLY? In a village FULL of Chuunin, Jounin and ANBU, she couldn't have spared even ONE higher ranked team to go drag the little shit back? Kakashi was apparently free enough to catch up with Naruto only MINUTES after the fight ended, so why the Hell couldn't he have gone with them when they left?
Sorry, that arc ending has just always bothered me. Rant end.
| edwardelric16 chapter 14 . 5/10/2014
Hello my friend! Was re-reading this seeing as it's one of my favorite stories and even now I'm still impressed with it one year later. I do hope sometime soon we can see it continued though I'm not sure how likely that might be but my fingers are still crossed.
| forbiddenfruitunloved chapter 9 . 4/30/2014
hmmm, ya know, multiple times, ninja's were shown using few to no hand seals for jutsu; while they help mold the chakra for the jutsu, they aren't necessary for mastery... though it seems that Kakashi can only use lightning jutsu without hand signs (though he could use water jutsu without a source)...
I'm also curious about why Naruto didn't show attraction towards Sakura who was considered attractive yet shows attraction towards Ino and Hinata...
Also, mind reading wasn't a Yamanaka skill; tons of ninja could use it; the Yamanaka skill was possession and connection of souls and minds, not just mind reading
| forbiddenfruitunloved chapter 5 . 4/30/2014
hmmm does Neji's personality really work in this fight? You gotta look at the context of his words... the Naruto that Neji talked to in canon was a failure who just recently graduated (so he didn't have that much time to improve)... your Naruto is labeled a genius... your Naruto is one that Neji would have labeled a threat...
Sasuke and Neji didn't have a superiority complex about their clans, just pride in it... they honestly were ahead of their peers and all. Sasuke never shoved his clan rank or status... and honestly, Neji didn't seem to want to actually hurt anyone, he just gave up on life and tried to make the weaklings quit before he had to hurt them too bad
| dbzsotrum9 chapter 3 . 4/29/2014
You realize that Lee happens to actually have the ability to use chakra, he just sucks at using it for ninjutsu and genjutsu... and because Toxin & Carnage are from venom, Naruto's ninjutu skills should transfer to Lee if he gets one of them...
Lee being bad at something is different from not having something... it's like a kid who sucks at martial arts no matter how much they practice... it's not a physical ability, they just suck...
Lee sucks so much at manipulating chakra that he could only use it for basic skills like water walking and shunshin...
| Senju Serena chapter 10 . 11/11/2013
that ending was funny
| Sevvus chapter 14 . 11/5/2013
that was a major fluff moment at the end there omg.. the urge to go AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW was like horribly great, but alas...i need to be silent as to not wake my roommate lol
good job! LOOOOVED IT!
can't wait for more...im still sick so i shouldn't be up this late but i couldn't stop reading...so its good there wasn't another chapter...but im still sad about it lol
| agnar chapter 2 . 10/3/2013
Fucking hell the Hokage is the biggest fucking moron on the planet.
So he's going to fuck over Naruto to test if NARUTO can put the mission first. Meanwhile, he totally fucking ignores that Naruto's 'teammates' CANNOT and WILL NOT put the mission first.
Way to go Sarutobi, you're dumber than a box of rocks. Way to fuck over a ninja who is too talented to waste, by WASTING him on a team that CANNOT succeed unless Naruto carries the whole fucking team on his back, including Kakashi who is obviously going to be an utterly USELESS teacher.
| agnar chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
Why oh WHY would you ruin your fic with the totally unfitting canon team 7? You make Naruto far stronger, he cannot be near dead last, he and sasuke *obviously* hate each other far more than canon. Chances of them EVER forming a real team are ZERO without totally changing one or both personality.
Yet they still somehow are teamed up EXACTLY the same, for NO good reason other than you seemingly used up your creativity on giving Naruto the symbiote without it having been on earth with peter or eddie.
Of course, even that isn't that creative since you're having him use the same exact powers and appearance as spider man and venom...
| A W chapter 14 . 9/7/2013
You should keep writing this, it's good.
| A W chapter 8 . 9/7/2013
Thank god, I hate Jiraiya sooo much, if he's forced into that 'training' trip (attempted murder by Jiraiya and Tsunade) then he had better hate it.
| A W chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
What kind of idiot would put those three on a team with the single most incompetent instructor known to shinobi kind?