Reviews for Lily Evans Saw James Potter
kokork chapter 1 . 4/17
please continue!
Goddess-of-the-Moon-39 chapter 1 . 10/31/2015
That was so incredible. I almost felt like crying. It seems so real and so sad and I really wish you wrote more!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/14/2014
Lily will know in the second/third chapter, they will then date/kiss/marry/make love/have child, the end.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
Then Lily knows, they date/kiss/make love, the end.
JilyLover-Always chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
D: Poor James D: Nice job with the writing though.
MaryLeboneFirst chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
When I read your story I started cry. Amazing.
ILOVESiriusB.HarryP.SalazarS chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
I love it! Sooooo much
winchesternandita chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
its toooogud:)

i cried...pls extend it:)
IfLooksCouldKill chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
I love it! I think I cried.

Lol my life
jonski chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
One of the best fics ive read. Love James and Lily!
sophieranier14 chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
that was really good! you should consider writing another chapter about how they get together!
xxneversayingxx chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
loved it!
ThoseWhoWander98 chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
Beautiful /3

I love you for writing this.:)

It's perfect, although I never thought of James as a drinker before.
AllTheNamesITryAreTaken chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
Awwwwwwwwwwwww! Poor Guy! I would LOVE if you kind of...extended it. From James's or Lily's or a narrarator's POV. Or Sirius. Or SOMEONE! I just want to hear all the specifics of your brilliance!
TheHollyWand chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
Very, very, nice. :) Very emotional. I don't really have the words.
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