|Reviews for Still Connected|
| Ismeme chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
| qwertyuiop678 chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
lol, loved the ending... poor zuko... *cuddles him*
| JackieStarSister chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
I can't believe this - I actually had the idea that Zuko and Iroh and maybe other characters could go to the Foggy Swamp! I think if Katara went a second time she would see Jet, and Aang would see Gyatso.
You say that Zuko and Iroh leave the swamp with a better understanding of themselves. How? What where they thinking when they saw those visions? Also, I wish we'd seen more interaction with the Swampbenders; you say Zuko and Iroh spent some time with them. What more did they talk about? It seems like you have this great idea for a oneshot, and I think you have potential, but it needs a little more effort, some emotional depth.
I think this was a mistake with uploading: There's no beginning for this line. "be surprised. I know that Azula's dad's favorite. I was stupid to believe her."
Some technical errors: You said "doing" instead of "dueling." You said "my people have been year" when I think you meant "my people have been here." "Boedy" should be "body." "Fo" should be "of."
Overall, good job. Keep writing!