Reviews for On the Bed
Lurecyka chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
I really enjoy reading this o/s. Good work girls :)
barbiedoll123 chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
yay they both got what they wanted
jamiebaker68 chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
Another great chapter, cant wait to read more.
Cullenfan524 chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
heheh I LOVED it!
xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
Loved :) Seriously, why cant i have a hot neighbor with a hero complex :((
blb1000 chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
I liked it! Wierd that a snake would be one the 2nd floor of a house. Also, it adds to the dreamy picture of E, but isn't realistic to be mowing the lawn in bare feet.
Tdot TwiFic chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
Naaaa, he should have waiting for Mrs. Stanley to start screaming. ou would think she learned how to copy by then. Maybe that could be the follow up, he runs to Mrs. Stanley's home as she is screaming and finds her naked jumping on her bed.

Never mind, its great the way it is.
grrrr.edward chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
mmm so good
biblepam chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
cute, funny, hot story... enjoyed it muchly..thanks for sharing.. Pam B.
rubell chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
hahaha! great lemon! great start to a relationship too!
Bee's Bookshelf chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
you girls are awesome! you're bein pimped out on my blog today for SEXY, SULTRY SATURDAY!

Always love to read you!
coryoplayer chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
Erica

Very hot, hot, hot!

Who'd of thunk that a real snake would have brought them together!

Cory
Chilly Howdy chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
Hey thanks for sharing this story with Kyla! Loved it! See you guys again because you work well! Chilly x
Cassiakohn chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
oh man that was awesome and hilarious. i'd have reacted the same as her if i spotted a snake in the house. the neighbors a mile away would hear me scream {wow that sounds wrong}. GREAT STORY!
loopylou992 chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
Brilliant! Love it totally. Now I want Edward to come round and mow my lawn with his shirt off!
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