|Reviews for On the Bed|
| loopylou992 chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
Brilliant! Love it totally. Now I want Edward to come round and mow my lawn with his shirt off!
| ScorpionsAngel2009 chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
That was really good!
| tds88 chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
Great Collab. I would definitely love to see this continued. It's a great o/s either way. That would totally be me if there was a snake in my room. It's one of my worst fears, right there with sharks and spiders. Although it would be worth it if I had Edward running into the room shirtless to come help.
| imatwin247 chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
i liked it... alot. :) are you continuing it or was this a one shot? hope to hear from ya soon. :)
| enamoramiento chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
Theres something seriously wrong with reality that it doesnt feature an Edward Cullen-application which comes rushing in bare-chested every time something disgusting happens...
| Ms. Elizabeth chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
Funny and sweet! :D
| chartwilightmom chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
nice and hot and sensual
i shall take the time to stare at my hubby as he cuts the grass next time
thanks for sharing this with us!
| OPOSOJOJ chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
That was wicked hott!
| KimberlyAnnT chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
I serious thought she might have gone to the pet store and let the snake go on purpose... I loved it you too.. Great collaboration..
| L5472 chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
Adorable. Sexy. Loved it.
| thunnababy chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
Cute story. Thanks for the beautiful image of Edward mowing without a shirt and going commando! LOL. For a minute there I thought that perhaps Bella planted that little snake. hehe.
| Jacquelineloveswriting chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
Wow! I would of reviewed earlier, but I've been busy. Great short story!
| FireandIceBoth chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
| BB Masen-Cullen chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
I loved that one! Soo funny with the little snake! Hehe! I absolutely loved it!
| MrsJakeBlack chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
SOOOO AWESOMEEE ;);)
SHOULD MAKE THAT INTO A STORY :D