|Reviews for My Story|
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/27/2014
Make more it was getting interesting
| Vampire-Anime-Queen chapter 2 . 7/14/2013
| AmutoLoLu chapter 2 . 4/26/2013
I like this
can you please make more of this cuz
I can't wait for the next chapter
| IkutoIsSmexy chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
I love this story
It gets me absorbed completly in
I can't wait to read the next chapter
| Asapdos4441 chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
YO! you need To write more. It jerked a baby tear from my eye.
And i hope that in the future you continue to write great chapters, for this story to build up into something that will have you stuck in layers of suspense.
Yeah... this is a very good first chapter, please make sure to update. I hope Amu gets to meet someone that truly loves her to show her that life can always have a happy ending.
| mzmroxx4 chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
Hey, Meme here.
This is just a quick review, nothing special.
Anyways, I liked your opening 8 sentences until you started giving us her information like a file.
And then you gave us a chunk of a paragraph. I'm sorry to say but it hurts people's eyes to read something like this. Your grammar looks pretty good but you need to space this out.
Plus, the idea has been done a few times. My suggestion to you is to add some originality. The key to reviews and such is to keep your reader in suspense. Otherwise it won't be as good as it can be.