|Reviews for Core of the Apple|
| Alisha chapter 1 . 7/12/2016
| Graystripe64 chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
Always loved this fic. It was one of the first MLP fanfics I remember reading. I figured, I faved it on , I'll surely favorite here too!
| TheFigureInTheCorner chapter 4 . 6/30/2012
Aaaaand there it is.
The chapter that broke the floodgates.
You. Are. Amazing.
I very, VERY rarely cry.
| Eclipse pony chapter 5 . 6/13/2012
Love it lol I'd love to see more of ur work
| Astrid-Myrna chapter 5 . 4/26/2012
I really enjoyed this story! It's totally something I'd see as an episode too. You did the characterizations very well!
| Scarlet Rabbit chapter 5 . 1/14/2012
A heart felt story, it got me a little teary eyed.
| jman377355 chapter 5 . 12/18/2011
I'm actually thinking this is just me but these last two chapters I've lost a lot of interest. I can't really point out anything specifically, I wonder if I'm just in the mood for a more actiony fic.
| jman377355 chapter 3 . 12/18/2011
Good chapter, wonder what this plan is. Braeburn was a nice touch.
| jman377355 chapter 2 . 12/18/2011
I could see AJ doing this, I'm a bit curious about RD, who'd she lose exactly? Both her parents?
| jman377355 chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Solid start. No noticeable grammar or spelling errors and everypony is in character.
| From Darkness and Light chapter 5 . 11/29/2011
I just finished reading the story...My, you sure kept everyone in character. And, it was heart-warming as well. Honestly, I felt this story deserves more reviews...Oh, well...Anyway, I think you did a splendid job and kept everything intact as everything was in correct order, nor was it too rushed or too slow.
Great job! Keep it up! Kudos! Peace out! XD
| Spectral Volta chapter 5 . 9/20/2011
really well done.
worry to relief set to bed like this always makes a good story and the use of memorabilia is a incredibly astonishing addition for the story moments
really great work and hope it continues
| ThrashingWhiplash chapter 5 . 9/8/2011
The fanfic gave me a warm, fuzzy feeling inside. First one I've ever gotten while reading one. That's awesome.
| AngelBornOfHell chapter 3 . 9/5/2011
I think that you characterized Braeburn wonderfully. The dialect and all was great. I can almost hear his accent rolling off the page! and i think it was interesting to see big mac's transition in character, from being passive to taking a more active approach
| ThrashingWhiplash chapter 3 . 8/31/2011
I usually only favorite clopfics and/or grimdarks. I'll make an exeception for this. This looks pretty awesome. I'd love to see the ending.