|Reviews for It's Not What It Looks Like|
| TriciaHearMeRoar chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
Awww! I love how she calls him Flynn when she's mad at him.
| NancyDrew13 chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
Wonderful story! It's very raw and I loved it. )
| Nithusa chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
| LinkxZelda46996 chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
oo i liked :D and i was laughing the whole time behind you in class.
| Starbrow chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
Really unique concept of how their life would be if Rapunzel had chosen a different ending. I also like (in a twisted way) the idea of an errant Flynn who isn't perfect as a reformed scoundrel. Your storytelling sucked me in...it was brilliant.
I have to admit, the way the lemon came about made me cringe, as someone who has caught their boyfriend with another woman, he was banished from the bedroom for a long time, so I was distressed for your Rapunzel and how quickly she got over it. I think I would have liked either a darker ending better (maybe her getting with him one last time or something, knowing that she was leaving him) or a sweeter leadup to them having angry sex. I wanted to leave this feedback not as a slam but just to offer a perspective on how your story made me feel, and would love to see more lemons in the future with a less heart-breaking set-up.
| jace4ever chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
I thought it was great. Good writing skill.
| moja-kocham chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
It was a very great read, especially since it's your first time doing a lemon story c:
| whathefuckglovefetish chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
That was good, and the idea of Rapunzel not telling Eugene about being the lost princess is an interesting concept.