Reviews for Whisked Away
AshRB chapter 7 . 1/4/2014
I decided to read through the rest of your stories while waiting for the rest of mine and goodness gracious, Butterfly! This is phenomenal! I'm at the edge of my seat here! I really hope that you still plan to finish this. I want to see Claire and Felicity meet each other and find a way home. This is You're such an amazing writer. (And it's also gotten me more excited to read the rest of my gift. )
black mizt chapter 5 . 3/30/2012
i really like this story i've only read a few harvest moon ones, but this is by far the best

please update soon i'm keen to read more

-black mizt

Kelina Dawn Hearan chapter 3 . 12/31/2011
This fic is a very nice fic. Don't worry, I don't mind waiting, just don't give up on this fic.
Angel Peach Blossom chapter 3 . 12/28/2011
Hey, don't worry about not updating right away! I think this was worth the wait! It was a little on the short side for me, for some reason, but it's still really great!

I don't have much to complain about as you did an excellent job! You are keeping up a good pace, the detail you are putting into this is just wonderful...

I'm really at a loss for words, but that's a good thing! I look forward to your next update! Just don't worry if it takes a while, okay?
MorWolfMor chapter 2 . 9/27/2011
This is really, really good. I'm curious as to what's going to happen next..hmmm. update soon please? :)
Tozz chapter 2 . 8/30/2011
A really exciting chapter :) Things are starting to make more sense. I like the different POVs. And I'm eager to see these two girls meet up! I think they'd make a good team. :D
AmyAddict1 chapter 2 . 8/29/2011
Yay for chapter 2! *claps*

So that is how the girls are connected- the Sechs Enpire. Makes sense. I love how you brought the two worlds together, especially with the use of the map in Godwin's study. I think that was a good touch, a very good idea.

Again, I love the detail you used in this chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Angel Peach Blossom chapter 2 . 8/29/2011
Interesting chapter here!

So, Claire is a prisoner of the empire then? As you know, I don't know a lot of RF1, so I didn't know about their tactics. But I have to say, this was very convincing!

Once again, your amount of detail is pretty astounding! That is something I like to see, especially in first person view! The way you go about things is simply wonderful!

I am feeling really sorry for both Claire and Felicity at this point. Of which, I want to point out, that is exactly what you want us to do here. So, you are doing an excellent job!

Just need to point out a couple of things, but to me these issues are minor. You misspelled Zack's name as Zak a couple of times. I'm sure you didn't intend for that to happen, and typos happen to the best of us!

Now for Felicity, because this time I knew the switch was coming, I'd recommend breaking up the paragraphs a bit. Some of the paragraphs with her was pretty long, and I lost my place easily more than once.

Now, aside from those two things, I must say you are doing a great job! Keep it up!
Tozz chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
I was really glad to find out about this story... I've actually been craving good HM fanfic lately, but that's practically impossible to find nowadays, without doing a lot of digging. So this is definitely a breath of fresh air! It's a really intriguing start and I'm curious to where you'll take it.
AmyAddict1 chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
This is awesome! Thanks for telling me about it. _

I enjoy the detail you put into this and I hope you continue to do so. I wonder how you are going to merge the two worlds together. Well, I guess I'll have to wait and see. Poor Claire and Felicity... I hope they are able to help each other. I'm looking forward to reading more of this. Keep it up!

Angel Peach Blossom chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
Whoa... it's hard to find words to describe what I just read.

First of all, I have to say thank you! Lately the quality of fics has been in a decline... or rather I say the quality took a nosedive! I want to thank you for showing that you will still put out quality work! We need more good fics around here!

Next... oh my gosh your detail in this... this is just... wonderful! The way you got into Claire's and Felicity's heads... oh my, I felt like I could understand both of them. Claire, the captive, and Felicity the fragile girl filled with curiosity... The way you wrote it was just fantastic!

I like how you showed the good side of Zack... then his true colors. Though admittedly that is backwards, I like how you pointed out how he really acted like, and then what Claire really saw. It's not something we see nowadays. Usually a character goes bad for no reason at it, or is OOC from the beginning. This is what makes your story fresh and unique, because in my eyes, you are adding to his character.

Spelling and grammar was also pretty good!

My only complaint was when POV switched from Claire to Felicity. I got kinda lost when I noticed the new narration. At first I thought, who are with, because I get very confused easily. Then I saw the name Felicity and I thought, 'oh, okay!' I'll admit, normally I don't like POV switching in the same chapter.

However, your stories are different, and seeing this made me realize why I usually don't. The reason is because we are barely with a character before we switch to someone else. In this case, you give us a good dose of Claire's thoughts and feelings before moving onto Felicity.

Anywho, aside from my own complaint, I'm looking forward to what happens next! Keep up the good work!