Reviews for Fine
mkm12 chapter 1 . 1/25
Absolutely loved this! Great story and well written.
dsl116 chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
Oh I loved the little story you wrote after "Fade". That one

really had my crying. I love your writing style and your attention to detail. I'm going to read everything you have posted.
lanternheart chapter 1 . 11/25/2011

Ha, Piss Off. Gotta remember that for later.
CeCe Away chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
Sorry I didn't get to this sooner, but very enjoyable. Always love to see the brothers edgy around each other and then put it back together.
doyleshuny chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
GADZOOKS and I thought my baby brother was pissy at times! I know Sammy would hate to hear this but I still feel sorry for him. I feel sorry for Dean. I mean he's just trying to help. I know Sammy knows that too. I just hope that next hunt goes okay. Maybe you'll tell us? *fingers crossed*
Rolletti chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
Squealing with delight. Okay, this is it, no more reading, but this was so good. Can't wait to read what comes next though. Aww poor Sam, wanting to be better, but can't. And sweet Dean...there are just no words.

Thanks for a job well done. Pat yourself on the back and give yourself a cookie...with chocolate.

skag trendy chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
I can understand Sam's frustration, and I really feel for the poor kid, but I also feel so sorry for Dean - he loves his little bro and he came so close to losing him. He's just so scared and I don't blame him for that.

Cheers hon. Beautiful.

Kind regards,

ST xxx
MysteryMadchen chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
Sooo sorry it took me until now to review this story. I read this when I got the alert but thought I'd reviewed and didn't. Love you stories and would love more on this series. Thanks so much for all your hard work, Nicole. :)
KKBELVIS chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
"See, you're still recovering," Dean said reasonably, not panting at all. He hadn't even broken a sweat yet. "Cut yourself some slack. We're not going to get anywhere if you keep insisting you can do things you can't."


Awesome chapter.

I loved Dean going easy and Sam realizing why. So good. So good.

And I would so love to read about the poltergiest hunt.

I get so excited to see you posting.


Shadow496 chapter 1 . 8/26/2011

While I liked Fade I'm not so sure I'm liking the tags to it, sorry :(

The writing's fine, and I suppose it's 'true' to what the characters may have acted like if this situation ever DID happen..but something bothers me about this story especially.

They do realize there's other things to do with their lives than hunt, right? They don't HAVE to hunt really. They could chose to do something...better for both them really, that doesn't require them to risk life and limb every day, especially after coming out the other side of cancer, right? Why waste the precious gift he's been given by risking it in some stupid stunt to prove he's still a 'hunter'? It seems...dumb, and I'd think Dean would value his brother's health and life more than to risk it AGAIN by sticking to hunting. Someone someday needs to knock sense into both of them and make them realize hunting isn't the only choice in life. Hope it's Bobby...
Jimelda chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
Awwww, this one is incredibly sweet despite the brother's bickering. I love Dean at the end, taking care of his little brother in that way. Great job with this, I am really looking forward to whatever else you've got up your sleeve. :)
Cainchan chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
This was so wonderful. I absolutely adore every tag to your story Fade. _-
BranchSuper chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
Good story.
mamapranayama chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
Nice angsty story and another great tag. Thanks for sharing this. :)
kiwimoonelmo chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
A very good tag to Fade which I to read more
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