Reviews for Hermione, I Miss You
Montara chapter 5 . 3/25/2014
So glad Hermione is awake. Not glad she can't remember :( Hopefully, she'll remember soon enough that Holly won't be traumatized!
Montara chapter 4 . 3/25/2014
I now can believe it was Ron that hurt Hermione. What a change in his behavior, all those years as "Uncle Ron" and Harry's best friend and now this...monster!

I wonder who attached Harry just to warn him?!

I just don't understand how could Ron enter Harry's home like that and take Holly? I mean, with his profession, his house should be heavily guarded...
Montara chapter 3 . 3/25/2014
Ron's kidding, right?!
Montara chapter 2 . 3/25/2014
Nine years in a coma :( Poor Hermione and Holly. Harry did all those paternity tests but never did his...
Montara chapter 1 . 3/25/2014
Ron was so jumpy...hope he wasn't the one that did that to her :(
Mularac chapter 7 . 3/25/2014
I agree that the last few chapter were a bit... lame. It could have been done a lot better.

But the first few chapters? brilliantly done. One of the best fan-fictions out there for sure. I know I'll be checking out your other stories after reading this.
Gruffard chapter 7 . 3/23/2014
The ending was very interesting, but I could see Ron losing Hermione to Harry by her cheating on him... That could make him angry.

Great story. Glad I found this.
AllWasWell07 chapter 7 . 3/18/2014
Of course I enjoyed the story. Great job!
anotherboarduser chapter 7 . 3/18/2014
While the story is mostly good, there are a few problems.

For example, how can Harry forgive Ron so quickly for what he did?
How come Harry didn't even know Holly is his child?
Why didn't Hermione just choose and be with Harry in the first place?
Isn't there something that can let people see others memories?
Isn't dementor's kiss essentially a death sentence? Then why bother with the prison sentence?

There are a lot of things that doesn't fully make sense in the story.

But I do find it interesting and I look forward to reading your next story.
poppabear11420 chapter 7 . 3/17/2014
Excellent story just need to wrap up the loose ends like the wedding and letting everyone in the story know that Holly is a Potter
Beyondthesea16 chapter 7 . 3/17/2014
nice update and ending.
Thrans chapter 7 . 3/17/2014
It was good :) I've been needing a story with happy ending.
major wallace chapter 7 . 3/16/2014
nice
draco122 chapter 7 . 3/16/2014
dude it was worth the wait it was awesome. I loved it
Draco122
Nicklley chapter 7 . 3/16/2014
I love it...
It is sooo cute... Hh they are perfect
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