Reviews for The shoulder
Dreamer22 chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
SO hot! well done
ykickamoocow111 chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
Apart from Harry's cock being bigger than Ron's (Harry is much smaller than Ron is) and Harry being the one doing the penetrating (as i think he would want to be submissive) you did a good job with this story.
Rooz990 chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
great story
Horus.Potter chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
There were a few grammatical typos/errors but overall well done. It was quite steamy. Nice job!
Eryk Lestrange chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
the most logical pairing in the HP universe!