|Reviews for A Favor|
| Not-Completely-Insane chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Are Credo and Kyrie brother and sister in this? If so, aw! And if not, still aw!
Is it bad that as soon as I realized Dante was a teacher all I could think was teacher!Dante/Student!Nero? That's all I can think of now...
| cuzzzz chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
these stories are hard to review because they're such blips.
also being just dialogue is not much of a story. the good stuff often comes in the details between lines. the "i like you you like me stuff" comes on a little strong. im more interested in soft subtle gestures that suggest desire more than "do you like me." since that's how it is in the real world (esp with taboo desires like these) and the ensuing confusion and ambiguity (of suggestive gestures or more coy comments, rather than direct "telling") is just deliciously suspenseful.
| bitbyboth chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
XD this was cute, I would love to see what happens in 'Mr. Dante's' class XD Great work.