|Reviews for Not Stalking Zuko|
| Boogum chapter 28 . 12/10/2012
/I will admit my first impulse was to go wherever it was and have a little peak myself. Just a little peak. /
*snorts* How did I not know that would be her first reaction. Katara, you never disappointment me, lol.
Poor, poor Zuko. I bet he's feeling pretty embarassed right now (and I was totally giggling at Aang singing the willy song in the background. Awkward, lol.) I also can't help but laugh at the fact Katara is all disappoiinted because she missed out on the nakedness.
/He'd talk to me, and suddenly, in my head, he'd be naked. How am I meant to listen with that much nudity going on/
LOL! This fic seriously cracks me up. I swear I just finish giggling and then come across something like this and the whole cycle repeats again.
Hahahaa, the great-grandfather scene was great. Much Aang/Zuko feels, which I love. And OMG, the man speech made me LAUGH. 'We are men!" (okay, I totally got Men in Tights stuck in my head when I read that), but tight-wearing men aside, the whole speech was just hilarious. I love Sokka, and I love that Zuko hi-fived him in agreement, haha.
Awww, the part about Ursa's notes was so sad. Poor Zuko. :(
/you know, long ago, I had this thing called dignity, but I've given up on ever having it again! /
Okay, that made me snort with laughter. Zuko, you are adorable. Never change.
OH, Katara. What a way to say it, lol. I love that Zuko is pleased and they give shy, awkward smiles at each other. So cute!
| Boogum chapter 27 . 12/10/2012
/She said Look as adorable as you and Sokka's mancrush on each other is, can you please get back to reading now! /
hahaa, that made me laugh. The mancrush is adorable, but I admit the best part was Zuko getting all flustery when Toph accused him of being in love with Katara. And the fact she was all giddy about it afterwards (as you do).
Katara's thought process made me both do "no, silly girl. He does like you; he's been throwing signals everywhere, you blind bat!" thing, but at the same time smile because she's finally accepting that, yeah, she's got a real thing for Zuko. I also liked that you had her notice that Zuko makes her feel young (because she doesn't have to mother him and they're on equal footing). Very nice.
| Boogum chapter 26 . 12/10/2012
Possibly, Katara. Possibly. Those recurring male!showgirls and trout bending are quite ... er, unique. I do love the fact Sokka managed to turn the whole dream into a message for 'make baked trout'. So typical of Sokka, lol.
/Later, after much persuading of a certain reluctant group member, we had made it to the leather goods shop and we were trying to help Sokka match his belt and shoes./
That actually made me snort with laughter, given the sentences that had preceeded this. Zuko can't be a happy-chappy right now. I'm not surprised inelegant struggling followed, or that pervy Katara (yes, Katara, you are such a perve!) took the time to admire the nice view.
Aww, the mourning scene was so sad. I like that you brought this up, though, because it was a horrible thing to happen to the Fire Nation (kid's shows just gloss right over that, but a lot of people would have died in those freezing waters after Aang destoryed the ships) and I think it was good for Katara (and the others) to see how much that effects the overall people of the FN, including Zuko.
Somehow, I think this pact to protect Aang is going to backfire in a really, really bad way. Also, lewd acts with a koala sheep? Oh dear.
Aww, you're going to make me tear-bend with all this talk of the crew. It's just so sadddd. :(
Haha, I knew they were going to get drunk when she pulled him into the cupboard and somehow ruin the dinner. I can see Zuko being much more open when drunk, and I appreciated that even then Katara was doing her best to cheer him up.
OMG! The argument about colour had me giggling non-stop. Aaang is beeing a little grumpy grump, and Zuko is getting all defensive, lol. This was the final touch:
/Sokka has declared Aang his shopping partner for life. Aang understands about colour./
I can perfectly imagine this, and it is hilarious.
Ooooo, sexy dream. Yeah, I bet you wrapped that sheet around you, Zuko, ehehehehee. Katara's stalking habits never cease to amuse me, and I do love the situations that arise because of them. So cute! Especially loved that he came back to find her and took her out onto the roof. Heart-to-heart chats and sunrises are always beautiful. Can't go wrong there.
| Boogum chapter 25 . 12/9/2012
Loved this chapter! I would say more, but I seriously need to go to bed right now and I was too tired to review as I read. Sorry. :(
Next review will be better!
| Boogum chapter 24 . 12/9/2012
OMG, that play. It has to be the craziest thing ever to be created. Dance/singing numbers, Katara putting on the red light, and then ending in a big pile of fire and death. You'd get some major emotional whiplash from watching something like that.
I loved the whole Zutara scene. It was touching and sweet and adorable and just everything that could make me fangirl (and they almost kissed!). I do feel a bit sorry for Aang, but Katara is right. Boundaries and respect, and no matter how cute he might be in his little bald way, he can't just take what he pleases because he likes her.
| Boogum chapter 23 . 12/8/2012
/He leaned over and whispered in my ear that this play is so bad it has hypnotised me with its awfulness and I can't look away./
Lololol, I don't blame him. Reminds me of this Beauty and the Beast version I watched. Worst thing ever, but it was truly mesmerising in its awfulness.
OMG, now Zuko is a floozy too. Hahahahahahaha. Brilliant. And things just get worse from here for those two. Awkward moment is awkward.
So it's almost 12:30 am here and I need sleep. So cutting this short: loved this chapter. I like how you handled the katara/Aang situation, and the Zuko/Toph moment was always cute. Looking forward to reading more!
| Boogum chapter 22 . 12/8/2012
/I've come up with a joke:
what's better than Zuko in the prison shirt?
Zuko with no shirt at all.
I crack me up.
I don't know if anyone else would find my joke funny, so I won't try it out just yet. It still needs a bit of work./
Oh, Katara. You crack me up too. Seriously just giggled for a few good seconds at that.
Awww, more Zuko/Toph cuteness. Trust him to be all responsible and skip over the smutty bits.
Haha, I love all this discussion about the play being 'cheeky' and Katara's frustration about Mai and fruit tarts. In fact, I just love this story. It never ceases to amuse me.
OMG, this play. Katara is indeed one hell of a floozy. That was hilarious.
| Boogum chapter 21 . 12/8/2012
I love how Zuko and Katara are such the Mum and Dad for Toph and Aang. It's adorable; especially when Toph snuggles with Zuko on the couch. Got a big 'awww' out of me.
LOL. Katara might as well rename her 'diary' to 'How to Get Zuko Shirtless'. *cackles*
haha, Zuko likes the book too. It seems everyone likes it, even if it does sound like the most awful book ever to grace shelves.
Ozai's cupboard is evil. I am not surprised (though mildly amused at the irony of Aang being in Ozai's room). But that comment about being 'attached to the boy' - yeah, I pulled out my pitchfork for that one. Down with Ozai cupboard!
Okay, Ozai and his cupboard are freaky. That's pretty horrid what he has done to Azula, and I'm wondering if you're going to take the 'redeem Azula' route in this story. Or perhaps the damage Ozai has done is too much. Sad either way.
/He might be an idiot, but he's my idiot. I'm not about to let anything hurt him again./
| Boogum chapter 20 . 12/7/2012
Haha, all of them bundling in the hammock was very funny and cute. I do love your Gaang moments.
Typical Zuko worrying about his firebending teaching method. Good thing he has Katara to keep him on track and stop him from getting too broody-like.
Ooo, awkward. Yeah, Katara did kind of ruin Zuko's tea waitering days with her big blabbermouth. Nice to see they got over that little obstacle thought and made up with much cuteness.
And now I need to get back to work. *sigh*
| Boogum chapter 19 . 12/7/2012
/I am among like-minded friends!/
Hahahahaha, this made me LAUGH! And it's so true. When something like this happens, everyone goes quiet and tries to listen. I love the fact Katara feels comfortable enough to be honest with Zuko, because she knows he'll be rational and not hysterical and kick up a big huge fuss over her. So sweet.
Good to see Zuko had a chat with Aang. I love the little guy, but he doesn't always get things right and he did indeed need to take the situation more seriously and just use firebending. The snotty crying and trying to cheer Aang up part was adorable, because I could see this happening and Zuko being alarmed when he realises just how much he has upset Aang with his shouting.
/and then Zuko said he wasn't mad, just disappointed.
There was another pause. Then Zuko said I can't believe I just said that, with some surprise./
Hahaa. Dadko already. Oh, how I love thee.
LOL, love how Katara is such a bossy pants miss demanding when she's currently in invalid mode. I have found that people who love to help others are often the worst invalids.
/Aang said he would do push ups for me quite happily and wandered over. Zuko picked him up by the back of his robes (as is his habit). It actually looks like he is picking up a stray, unruly kitten by the scruff of the neck when he does this. Seriously, all Aang needs to do is purr and the image is complete. Zuko /
Adorable, adorable, adorable! I love this image; I love this whole description. So funny.
Awwwwwwwwwwwww, the whole bedroom scene was just too cute for words. He sang for her, and that is just sweet. I love his shyness, and how he made Katara fess up, and just how awkward and cute they were. I'm all gushy right now.
/Could I get a different bell for each person? That way I could ring for who I want, if I only wanted to see one person in particular, thus avoiding further mix ups when I ring and get everybody. /
I imagine the 'Zuko bell' would be getting a lot ofringing, haha.
| Boogum chapter 18 . 12/7/2012
This is going to be short because I'm dead tired and have to get back to work, but:
1) Food Fight was hilarious. I love Sokka, I love Zuko, I love you're giving them such an awesome bromance.
2) Wet shirtless Zuko? Yes, please! More seriously, I loved their little conversation. You know Katara would never find Zuko boring.
3) Scar touching made me get the sappiest grin on my face. I would be queen of the sappy smiles right now, because it was just such a nice, sweet little moment, even if it was tinged with sadness.
4) Professor Zuko was deliciously sexy in his Mr Serious Teacher mode. I don't blame Katara for admiring the view ... or thinking of that prison outfit (still gets a giggle out of me).
5) Poison bite scene was intense and I loved that you managed to get Zuko in there to do the sucking. That sounds dirty, but meh. You know what I mean. It had to be him! Also, Doctor Zuko is made of win!
6) I want one of those bells!
| Boogum chapter 17 . 12/7/2012
Gah, I was reading this earlier and then had to go out to do some Christmas shopping. Now I can't remember what I said in my original review. Oh well.
The letter was really quite sad, with this almost bittersweet feeling. I'm glad I got to know what was in it, and that Katara was there to give Zuko a nudge in the right direction. Trust him to take the sink metaphor in its most negative interpretation. Zuko opening up to Katara a bit more about his father/family life was also a very touching scene. I like that you're doing it in portions; it makes it feel much more realistic, because Zuko, while quite brooding, isn't really that open.
Katara's dream cracked me up. Sounds like one of mine: random and, if thought about too closely, mildly disturbing. I think the many Jets was a nice touch, though I had to do a "NOOO!" cry when I saw "I got Zuko and the Jets", because then I got Benny and the Jets stuck in my head. Yeah. And I'm rambling ...
Lol, trust Toph to be evil about the Truth or Dare game, and trust Aang to not be able to be silent for 5 minutes, haha.
Oh dear. Aang did not just call Katara 'his girl'. Yeahhhh, this is not going to go down well. Hahaha, I love Katara's response. Kiss him on the cheek, and top it all off with a 'In your face!' statement. I'm glad she didn't kiss Zuko on the lips, for exactly the reasons she outlined earlier. Public (forced) kisses just are so blegh, but this was funny and cute and I enjoyed it a lot.
Oooo, she called him 'my Zuko'. Yep, Katara is a lost cause and soon she'll have to stop visiting Egypt (cause she's in denial, get it? ehehe). And that is my lame pun for the day quota fulfilled.
| Boogum chapter 16 . 12/6/2012
I'm really loving Zuko and Suki right now. I could totally see them winning the three-legged race and hugging, haha.
I wish I could see Toph and Sokka's play! Sounds so funny.
Katara was definitely being jealous in this chapter. I'm glad Zuko was able to knock some sense into her (and without a stick, lol). I'm going to have stop here, but will be back with more reviews later!
| Boogum chapter 15 . 12/6/2012
/Suki then stomped on the box quite forcefully and was joined by Zuko. They got a bit into stomping on the box actually. They got their marble and headed off to the next puzzle thinking they have solved it./
LOL! I could so see them doing that, hhahaha.
I am loving Team We Hate Useless Logic Puzzles. In fact, I love them so much my stomach is currently protesting from laughing too hard. This is priceless. I love that they kept cheating, losing points, and can only agree on how stupid the puzzles were, etc. So funny.
haha, I love that Sokka and Katara have to run away to stop being scared. I also love that Toph trapped them in rocks. Go Toph!
LOL, love the new name. Also, I very much appreciated their bonding scene. This was awesome, and YOU are awesome for writing it!
| Boogum chapter 14 . 12/6/2012
I love it when Zuko is all shy. Makes me just want to hug him, though now I really, really want to know what was in that letter!
Also, Love Amongst the Dragons does indeed sound terrible. I bet Sokka will like it, lol.
Ooo, I'm curious to see how this Air Nomad celebration will turn out. Trust Zuko to be all about training, haha.
/Secretly I am very glad of this, before Zuko joined us, I was the unfun one. But Zuko makes me look like I'm an extraordinary comedian./
I had to laugh at this because I can totally see Katara feelign this way and secretly being pleased that here was someone more serious than her (according to the group), lol.