|Reviews for Grand Line Academy|
| AruAla chapter 21 . 1/16
I really can't enjoy this story... A lot of it resembles Yasaonna's One Piece Academy... Hancock being Luffy's ex. Nami and Arlong part even though she said she was going to school. Makino owning a bar. And the part where they have sex for the first time, caused by an argument because of Hancock. The way Luffy and Ace interact, the OOC way of arguing but still loving each other and witty remarks is even a trademark from yasa because she writes them as one of the first that OOC. This story is a cliche. I can guess what the ending is about. Luffy is leaving and tells Nami to go on with her live and find another man. He comes back in the prequel, surprising his friends and his relationship with Luffy and Nami won't work well at first because Nami lost his trust in him or so. I haven't read it yet, but I will laugh if I'm correct.
Be glad Yasa hasnt read this. She would be very dissapointed
| request removal chapter 1 . 11/28/2014
Delete my reviews my reviews please.
| susanna chapter 43 . 9/4/2014
Awww man i should seen this coming the 2 years separation
I was like wow but seriouly
Cool *eyes sparkling*
| susanna chapter 2 . 9/4/2014
I like that part hahaha
Zoro: i was asleep atlease i wasn't smiling like a complete idiot during a horror would have think you were retarded...
Hahaha i laugh my head out hahaha
| Guest chapter 50 . 8/1/2014
It's excactly like "One Piece Academy" from Yasaonna-Chan, only longer.
Plus, I hate bad ends.
Pretty please for a sequel ;)
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/13/2014
Luffy should've been the one who can't swim ( really good tho I'm enjoying it thoroughly 3
| Rosi Hidenori chapter 23 . 5/12/2014
I'm barely on chapter 23 but I'm loving this! Its exciting and awesome. You're amazing.
| boss chapter 50 . 3/31/2014
That touched my heart
| bob chapter 25 . 3/30/2014
no only OP
| stuff chapter 20 . 3/30/2014
WTF...machines are rigged and that shouldnt make them stop loving i am pretty sure that if Zoro and Robin did that they would get a zero too...like i said...IT DON'T MATTER!
| ZoRo.LuNa chapter 50 . 3/16/2014
it was nice! :) but also, could you also mind to write story in New World? :)
| Future.Pirate.King chapter 50 . 3/5/2014
I hate you so much right now you seriously had me in tears at how sad this was. This was a great story and can't wait to start reading the sequel next.
| Gamerman1 chapter 1 . 2/13/2014
I wanted to see Gold Rogers as the Principle for some reason but Rayleigh is awesome as well.
| willy.hizzy chapter 50 . 2/13/2014
Not a bad story.
| MakeMeSmile chapter 50 . 1/28/2014
Aw... really heart breaking...
It made me cry! It was so great it made me cry :-)...
I'll be tuning on the sequel! Great nonfiction story of onepiece i've read.
Please keep goin on. Tehe i just cant stop reading it until i finish it... haha. Been reading for one day and i'm bein called a weirdo for squealing and other stuff... LuNa!