Reviews for Reflections
Guest chapter 35 . 8/29/2015
Missed this chapter update somehow.

Anyway, I was pretty happy with this story until this chapter. It's become a cliche in this fandom to have an experienced Edward (who, although he had only always loved Bella, has f'ed around with other girls) and pure, virginal Bella ( who couldn't IMAGINE possibly ever having sex with anyone other than Edward although others have treated her better).

I really hoped that either both of them or neither of them were virgins. Or, if one of them was not a virgin, it would be Bella.

But in response to another poster who absolutely couldn't believe Bella never masturbated, I never did until I was well into college. It never occurred to me to masturbate while I was still in high school. I didn't think girls did that!
snoopylover60 chapter 36 . 8/29/2015
Great story. I am glad they got their HEA!

Thank you for sharing :)
Lizzymason981 chapter 36 . 8/29/2015
Thank you:) such a great end to a great story!
sujari6 chapter 36 . 8/29/2015
Edward's a lucky man to have such a forgiving Bella. Loved this story.
Guest chapter 35 . 8/25/2015
Would llloooovvvveee to read an update of my favorite story.
Guest chapter 35 . 7/28/2015
So she's 17 and has never had an orgasm?
She's never masterbated?
Yeah, cos that's entirely believable*rolls eyes!
What is it with you writers, why does she have to be so pathetically pure? She can't even touch her own bits. SMH,
slc6548 chapter 35 . 7/28/2015
Excellent chapter! So happy he finally grew a pair!
Nissa-Cullen chapter 35 . 7/28/2015
Just as long as prom doesn't turn out like Carrie I think they'll be ok. It's amazing how many guys loose their virginity just to get it over with. Once they hit that age sex is all they think about. At least he's good with Bella.
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 35 . 7/25/2015
WELL THEY ARE GETTING CLOSER AND CLOSER TO HAVING SEX YOU THINK THEY WILL AT PROM HAVE YOU THOUGHT ABOUT WRITTING A SEQUEL TO THIS STORY THEM GOING TO COLLEGE GETTING MARRIED AND HAVING BABIES AND HEAVEN EVER AFTER PLEASE THINK ABOUT IT I KNOW IT WOULD BE PLEASE THINK ABOUT IT THANK YOU
rocklesson86 chapter 35 . 7/23/2015
I never got the sex talk from my parents and I had crappy sex ed. Porn taught me about sex. I cannot wait for more.
goldseadragon chapter 35 . 7/23/2015
Even though they're in the process of making up and moving forward, I feel like Edward doesn't deserve Bella's virginity. IRL that would totally not be my business, but as a reader I feel like I can put in my two cents. :p
Judyblue95 chapter 35 . 7/22/2015
How wonderful to see a new chapter in my inbox this morning, or rather last night, of this story I have loved and anguished over now for a long time...I'm so happy that you will finish it. That Edward finally came to his senses is such a relief! Bella has endured more than her share of heartache over him. I 'm very glad she can let him in, now that he has his head out of his ass, and that they can finally be together! I'm so eager for more and for the inevitability, I hope, of sex for them. Prom first. I love that Bella is a plus size girl, like so many of us are, and that she finally gets her love with her friend, and man of her dreams. Thanks for writing this. I have been ruined by ruinedbyrob! In a good way, of course!
sujari6 chapter 35 . 7/22/2015
Pity that he didn't wait to be her first as well and that she thinks that's OK because she's lucky to have him because she thinks he's so gorgeous so why would he wait for her. Her self-esteem is still low. Also having been with several girls at the age of seventeen does make him a man-whore.
Rita01tx chapter 35 . 7/22/2015
Funny how, after the initial trepidation when they arrive at school, Bella pulls Edward's love around her like a suit of armor so that the slings and arrows aimed at her by the skank brigade simply bounce off LOL!
I think confidence has a lot to do with it...confidence in her feelin's for Edward and, more importantly, her confidence in his feelin's for her! Took a long road to get 'em to this point but it's very satisfyin' to see them finally where they're supposed to be...in each other's arms!
Azlady2003 chapter 35 . 7/22/2015
I wish bella would stop putting herself down and saying he choose me, like shes chopped liver. Edward should be happy and the one saying she choose me because his ass is lucky that she choose him. I know its hard for bella not to put herself down as I consistently do it myself...or i'll see a cute hot guy and think yeah right like he'll want my fat ugly ass...but yeah i loved the lemon
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