Reviews for Reflections
linda8599 chapter 5 . 5/20/2012
Now that was sweet :-)
sujari6 chapter 5 . 5/20/2012
Edward's such a great friend.
Karriek chapter 4 . 4/22/2012
You capture the sibling rivalry perfectly. It's sad when Bella thinks or refers to her body as a bulk, but I appreciate that it's a corporal part of the story. Looking forward to reading more of this one.
EnidBarb chapter 4 . 3/29/2012
love this
Azlady2003 chapter 4 . 3/17/2012
Hmmm I'm liking it it's different but I like it, I'm taking it when she comes back she's skinny?
Rita01tx chapter 4 . 3/17/2012
Oh, I feel for Bella's aversion to shopping (me too)! But doing something about her hideous bedroom at Charlie's was an absolute MUST! GAH! Little Edward just pulls on my heart strings. Glad he and Bella are going to be friends...they need each other.

And I really can't wait til he grows up and turns into the uberhottie we all know and love, making all the girls float right past Jasper and Emmett with their noses in the air to get to him LOL!
Rita01tx chapter 3 . 3/17/2012
{OK, this is weird...I never got chapter 3! No wonder I couldn't find my comment for it!}

HUGS! I was just thinkin' about you the other day, Christa darlin', and here you are posting a new chapter (or 2) of Reflections! You musta heard me LOL!

I can see all your characters so clearly, it's amazing! Weedy, klutzy little Eddie LOL! Pudgy Bella! Scrawny Jasper and CuddlyBear Emmett! Can't believe Charlie is such a putz! Love Aunt Janet!

Beautifully written BB!
sujari6 chapter 4 . 3/17/2012
Looked the thought of Emmett ballet dancing.
hippie starr chapter 3 . 12/29/2011
How old is Edward? He sounds adorable.

Poor Bella. I feel so bad for the girl. Kids can be so cruel and so can the adults sadly.

Teenagers, especially the newly turned ones, are already awkward and self concious. I can only imagine adding the weight issue.

I hope you continue the story. I'm ready for more Edward. I'm nervous for the fallout though.
xxxjanicexxx chapter 3 . 12/1/2011
That was harder to read as I can associate with Bella's skewed view of herself so I'm glad you gave us the AN leaving some hope! Great chapter. X
Darcyfitz1 chapter 3 . 11/20/2011
It's heartbreaking, the relationship between Charlie and Bella. Of course he missed her, even if he's a moronic pig who lets people insult his daughter. What is wrong with some parents? Anyway, great chapter! Can't wait to see more of E/B friendship developing!
Darcyfitz1 chapter 2 . 11/20/2011
Those kids are horrible! Carlisle to the rescue. And it's great how you put Edward in the role of klutz here! Poor thing. Keep this story going, I think it will be great!
Darcyfitz1 chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Great beginning! I feel for poor Bella; it's disgusting how people treat overweight people. But when it's your own parents, that is just so sad. I hope Bella can find some acceptance in Forks, but I guess it will get worse before better.
Azlady2003 chapter 3 . 11/16/2011
Love it can't wait for more
Pattypattz chapter 3 . 11/16/2011
Hi bb, and a nice update! Wow I'm really getting a feel for how Bella's life has been. Her parents sound kinda screwed up and she is just caught in the middle. Seems like poor Charlie was trying to be a good father, and then Renee left him and it has just wounded his heart and he has closed himself off...but, I do see some of his love for Bella peering out now and then. Like all the pictures in the hallway. He wants to do right by her, but he just doesn't know how.

Jasper and Emmett sound so funny. Eddie Haskel...LMAO. I did see re-runs of "LITB" and man they are funny as hell. Emmett is far to good looking to be Eddie though. Eddie strikes me as a goof-ball type that gets into trouble for attention and he isn't easy on the eyes. Damn girl, Kellan looked HAWT at the LA black carpet event. I like him with dark hair, and those "fuckME" dimples of his.

Thank goodness she has her Aunt Janet and Uncle Mark...they appear to really love and care about her. I have a feeling Janet will give her brother, Charlie shit if he needs it too.

I'm still hanging in here, and hope your wrist are better bb. Say hi to LittleB for me! Abracci *HUGS*, Nicole
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