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JulBram chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
Well done!
Jedi Skysinger chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
Very sweet with just the right touch of angst. It's very easy in abusive situations to become the very thing you hated, so I liked how you brought out his struggle. BTW, loved the kid's names :) Great job!
i luv ewansmile chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
Good story. Thanks for sharing.
ariesrobin chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
very nice, really enjoyed this. :-)
storyfan101 chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
This is sad and sweet at the same time. I have faith in Michael and Fiona. Their kids are special and have to grow up OK. They have a lot to live up to for their name-sakes. :-)
DaisyDay chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
Wow, I felt a lot of emotions reading this story. I like how Michael is working hard to just have a normal life. He and Fi seem so happy with their Norman Rockwell way of life with the two perfect kids. And, btw, how cute are their names? Yet, Michael can't let go of the past. You've written it out so realistically and beautifully. I loved it all!
Springsign chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
Great work, loved the whole scenario.
BurnedmichaelY chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
lovely :)
VeeFall chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
Very good.
bnlove chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
this was so sweet

Sad, but i love the westen family and supportive Fi!

Great job (: