Reviews for Last Kiss
Smiley face chapter 1 . 2/6
Very good. Was that song a original ? It was a beautiful song .
Niffler81 chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
OMG that was so adorable and cute and just... *overwhelmed with emotions*
Laugh Like You Aren't Breaking chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
I loved it! :) You're an awesome writer! :D
Light Under My Skin chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
Hi! Your story is really good, really interesting, but I hope you don't mind if I give you some constructive criticism.

If you do, don't read the rest, and stay content with the fact that your story is cute :)

But... if you do...

While the writing in itself is solid in this story, the characters are a little lacking, I think. Yes, Lily is in love with James, hopelessly, but she's still... she's still Lily. And, in reality, I don't think she'd just accept his kiss, after she was hurt and he was kissing a girl not all of three minutes before he kissed her. Yes, she's broken and she loves him, but it seems a little less than plausible that she'd be so willing to take him back, without any words, just accept his joking tone. Its just... I think it takes away from your stories, from you characters and from Lily's pain, to see her so easily take him back like that
LJ lover chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
It is a bit too corny.
jily-dizzie chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
Thank you guys who reviewed SO MUCH. I spent a while on this one, but i'm really happy about how it turned out.

Thanks for reading all my stories, and i WILL continue the others soon. :D

Love you ALL!

Aya, the author
ILoveHarryPotterForever chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
Awh, this is so sad . . . and sweet!(:

I love how the Marauders just left James for Lily, it's adorable.

Great story! :D
TheHollyWand chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
Tears slipped down my face. :)