|Reviews for A Toy and a Friend|
| hhrforever chapter 1 . 10/8/2015
Wow. Wow. Great job! So hot.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
This was so hot. I would love to read more lemons from you ;)
| floop chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
to this day, this is the hottest harry/hermione smut I have found and I always come back to read it.
| jonski chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
Very goood... can you make some James and Lily fics like this?
| R. Schoen chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
Please continue the story.
| kildar2010 chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
meh not bad but the whole leaping into sex thing is a bit much
still not bad
| Michaelamalfoy chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
Omfg 3 loved
| Penny is wise chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
Awesome story. A sequel would be cool just to get the reactions of certain red heads.
| wolf550e chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
The spelling is ridiculously terrible. As if done on purpose.
| Penghost chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
You have done a very good job.
You describe a scene cut from live, even when you did go quite fast even for them.
Yes the now each other for years and yes the had some scares experience you still let them be quite bold.
Or is it the enormous need together with there absolute trust to let them move that fast all of a sudden?
Anyway a nice piece of work.
And it would be very interesting what happened in the next few month!
Wit the uproar of the redheads and the like...
It would be fun for sure...
I hope you can persuade your muse soon...
| Joe Lawyer chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
I liked this story a lot. Very little in the way of unnecessary dramatics or overemotional unrealistic angst. I genuinely felt like Harry and Hermione were two very mature adults who didn’t feel the need to act like they were having an illicit high school-esque hook up. It was frank and blunt and quite nice to read. Great sexually charged dialog…I say charged purposefully. It certainly wasn’t hardcore dirty talk, but very nice and realistic considering this was their first time together. Perhaps in time it could be more advanced.
I especially liked how with just a look they realized they were now a couple. That’s a whole different level of emotional intimacy on display there, forged by years of friendship and shared hardship and complete trust. It’s unusual to see an author not try to overplay that. More often than not they can’t help but write these kinds of scenes as if Harry and Hermione weren’t best friends since they were 11. More drama I suppose.
This was understated and soft and very well done. Thanks for a great read!
| Ellae chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
It started out interesting, right up until "cheeky thong." I don't want to insult you, but your use of technical terms is, to be honest, a serious mood killer. The only time I hear about labia minor is in my anatomy class. Speaking of, the urethra only deals with urine. Normally I don't review fics I don't like, but I genuinely want you to improve. Trust me, when you're having a sexy man eat you out the right way, you are not thinking about "vagina".
| KataraLovesAang chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
that was hot great story
| Nithusa chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
| harryhermionealways chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
WOW! What a one shot! Really liked it and would read another chapter if you decided to write one. Harry and Hermione should always be together!