|Reviews for Yotsuko 20 Theme|
| manilap chapter 6 . 11/23/2012
Hey! I really like this fanfic! And the ending for ch6 totally caught me off guard! I thought Rox was alive throughout most of it but when I got to the part where Sora started to tell Rox why Vani beat him, I was like "oh no...Roxas is dead!" Haha but tht was really good and I really love ur writing! Update soon!
| Yue Asuka chapter 6 . 11/10/2012
i like the first and second chapther! XD and for theme.. how about halloween or thanksgiving?
| Quatre mains chapter 6 . 11/3/2012
omg...omg, i just omg no QAQ! I thought roxas was dead when vani punched him ;_; but i suspected more or less when vani and ven didnt want to see Roxas since hell, they would! Anyway, it was so sad...poor my baby sora aww babies, why, wHy! *cries* i dunno but it somehow reminds of my own story at least the beginning but i still have to write it, i'm having troubles by writing into english so it will take a while xD! But when i have it i'll note you :3
It's time to shower you with reviews. I'm so sorry for not doing it, i have been off from this site since that stupid girl told me to erase my old stories because i don't update haha;; anyway, a promise is a promise and i really do love your stories and writing, hope my reviews can cheer you up a bit :3.
| InnocentGraces chapter 6 . 10/31/2012
When I read the start, I thought you were describing Namine's room.
But then I realize it's a hospital room.
Yeah, silly, I know.
And a PS VITA!? IWANTONEIWANTONEIWANTONE! I want to play Tales of Innocence-R with it!
Okay, I'm done.
The moment I reached the part where Sora told Roxas that the V duo ('be referring them as such in AU fics) said something strange, I immediately figured out that Roxas is actually already dead. (Sorry, but this is just so predictable.)
But it's good.
Be waiting for your next update.
| Karkalicious Homestuck chapter 6 . 10/30/2012
Though it always makes me wanna cry when I read something along these lines, I liked it and I think you did fine )
| RNSVCZ chapter 6 . 10/29/2012
I REFUSE TO BE LAZY! Ok, first reaction: DA FUCK?! Roxas died?! Q.Q And Sora still thought he was alive? *mind blown* I really liked this chapter! I always liked psychology. If I didn't want to be a VA, I would love to be a Psychologist.
| Quatre mains chapter 5 . 10/20/2012
asdasdlsumiienzl why didnt i see this update? ;AAA; OMG I LOVE IT *3*! It was so nice and cute, i love how sora made himself a moogle to make roxas happy, it was so damn cute ;w; and awwe lol vanitas xDDDDD his sora complex is cute too :3 lol ven, i just thought that he is the sleepy beauty because of his long naps XD lololol. I don't think you write bad ;o; i think otherwise, actually you're my favorite author and i really do love everything you write or why do i write a long review xDDD;; i don't like to bore people with my words haha. But it's okay QwQ having writing blocks and such, i wish i could help you but i only can molest you with my reviews xDDD.
I gonna review your other story ;3; i forget to review a lot of stories, i'm a silly reader xD, but i know, reviews can make people happy so imma spam you with reviews haha, okay i said too much, continue the great job :3 awwe i love this four too much, they are so aseslisuopl (can't be explained with words xDD)
| Karkalicious Homestuck chapter 5 . 10/16/2012
Your writings fine ) though hat won't help much with you getting out of that rut, I thought it needed mentioning. The kupo story was rather adorable and "sessions"...between Vani and Ven...nice inuendo. XD
| RNSVCZ chapter 5 . 10/16/2012
This chapter made my giggle so much! Thanks for continuing this! I love these so much!
| InnocentGraces chapter 5 . 10/16/2012
This is pretty cute.
The idea of Sora turning himself into a moogle is pretty unthinkable.
| Chibi Atariel Tsukai chapter 4 . 6/16/2012
Awww! "Master" made me laugh, but feel bad for poor Ven at the same time!
| Chibi Atariel Tsukai chapter 3 . 6/15/2012
XDDD A girl with spiky black hair. Basically, Ven just wants to see a girly Vanitas
| Chibi Atariel Tsukai chapter 2 . 6/15/2012
This one was good too! When I read on your profile that you like Sora as a seme, I thought it was a little weird, but it's funny this way!
And I'm glad I'm not the only one who figured that Vanitas would hate the heat. ) That's why I mentioned it in my fic.
| Chibi Atariel Tsukai chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
Now I'm reading your stuff! D
This one is really good so far!
I like how you compared all four of them to the sky! I never thought about it like that!
| KatrinaEagle chapter 4 . 3/31/2012
SO GOOD. WHY DON'T I KNOW OF THIS SOONER.
Wonderfully written. I love how Ventus is the eldest and pseudo-angelic. Yes moar plz. :3