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| nhrc chapter 14 . 7/2
All is well that ends well.
| nhrc chapter 10 . 7/1
(shocked face) Gay ?!
Well that explains a lot of things.
| nhrc chapter 1 . 7/1
I love it. can really imagine the festival scene:
Crowd , background noises, people passing by San and Bella and then suddenly they look at each other and everything around them becomes slow, the music changes ... and the magic happened .
| orchidluv chapter 8 . 2/11
It switches from third POV to Whoever's POV so quick it can be little hard to follow, but I am hooked reading.
| orchidluv chapter 6 . 2/11
this is a good story! you should get a beta though
| Sassyvampmama chapter 14 . 8/25/2016
Thanks for sharing
| Guest chapter 14 . 2/17/2015
| Bell 1 chapter 14 . 11/29/2014
I really enjoyed your story with the exceptions mentioned in the earlier review. I think you could do really well if you either get a beta, or work to fine tune the spelling and grammar.
I like how you found a way for the Cullens to be a part of Bella's life, her entire life if they choose. I also love Emmett and Bella's close relationship. I found Alice's new shopping experience hilarious and Jasper's stealth mode too.
I'm so glad that Sam and Bella found a way to love each other, even though neither was happy about the imprint being the reason they were brought together.
| Bell 1 chapter 4 . 11/25/2014
Before I go into the real reason for this chapter's review (because I tend to review on the last chapters only), I want you to know I am enjoying your story. Both Bella and Sam seem to be really mixed up with this whole imprint thing. They like, but don't like each other, want and don't want to be with each other, and neither likes the imprinting. I'm looking forward to how they work things out while dealing with the vampires that are in the area and Victoria being after Bella.
Last chapter I overlooked it, but you need to either write your stories in all 1st person, or 3rd person, but not both. Especially not both in the same paragraph and back and forth. There are other grammar/spelling errors, but the jumping between view points is really throwing off the flow of the story.
Using the 2nd paragraph as an example (could even use the last paragraph)...
The others were cool though. I liked them. Even Jake was coming around, it had been 3 weeks since the whole, I imprinted on you, and I stole you're dream girl thing happened. Jaked seemed to be accepting things, but there was still a slight awkwardness to the whole thing. She still felt guilty. He was trying though, and she admired him for that. Seth was her favorite, and she loved Paul's impring, Emily, she was so sweet. She didn't put up with Paul's crap either, and had slapped him up top his head the other day, when he had called me, Leech Lover. Kim was a nice girl to. She was Jared's girl, and she was crazy about him.
For 1st person (as you suggest by stating Bella's POV at the beginning of the chapter):
The others were cool though. I liked them. Even Jake was coming around. It had been three weeks since the whole, I imprinted on you and stole you're dream girl, thing happened. Jaked seemed to be accepting things, but there was still a slight awkwardness to the whole thing. I still felt guilty. He was trying though, and I admired him for that. Seth was my favorite, and I loved Paul's imprint, Emily. She was so sweet. She didn't put up with Paul's crap either, and had slapped him up top his head the other day when he had called me Leech Lover. Kim was a nice girl too. She was Jared's girl and was crazy about him.
| M chapter 14 . 10/4/2014
I LOVE IT!
| Guest chapter 14 . 8/19/2014
cmon chapter 15
| Guest chapter 14 . 8/16/2014
| gahhhh chapter 14 . 8/2/2014
More please please please please please please
| jacksperluvr chapter 14 . 7/10/2014
I liked it a lot
| Skullqueencb chapter 14 . 6/1/2014