Reviews for Not Him
BasementDragon101 chapter 1 . 3/9
MUST. READ. REST. OF. STORY.

Seriously, this is really good! You got his personality spot on! Few things that I might want to tell you. A lot of people see his human form as his voice actor, Stephen Merchant. Use him as a reference guide. That is what I always do when I am writing a description. I look at a picture of who or what I am trying to describe. :3 Please continue!
Ilovewritting chapter 1 . 9/9/2014
Ooh that is great! keep writing :-)

Uh I can imagine Chell bump into Professor Wheatley again and this time in the library :o :)
mkmkmk chapter 1 . 6/16/2014
Interesting...I'd be grateful for you to continue...this is quite good. Better than that actually, but you get the idea. :)
xXxKateKaysxXx chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
D: Continue please!
Wistful dreamer chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
It's kinda heartbreaking
It's for both sides, luv.
For her, it's sad that she leaves, the missing part, the hurt, the disappointment
For him, it's sad that he'll never know (unless you decide to continue, of course 3 )
Sad that he's still the same, still so lovable, yet utterly different.
Ah luv, tis a crying shame that good stories don't necessarily have happy endings

It is fitting
Yet heartbreaking

I hope that there is a continuation tho!
It's complete in itself, yes

But the heart wants what the heart wants

XF

Lotsa love,
GlassesBlu
Guest chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
Wow. Awesome!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Y'know, I thinki you should really continue on. I like this Wheatley better than the old one, for some reason. Maybe it's the whole "The-other-one's-a-robot-that-goes-bad" thing with the old Wheatley
StoryGirl.98 chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
This was fantastic!

I really hope you decide to continue this.
AnnaBacon chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Continue plz.
Obsession and Insanity chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
Please Update! I want to know what happens next!
Citrine Griffin chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
d'aaw. that was cute. cute friendship fic is cute. 3
PootisHolliday chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
her tank top clearly says aperture and her jacket has an aperture science logo on it
kaimuki wahine chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
Can't wait for the next chapter! I want to know what happens next! (I must know~!) w
catki19 chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
this is realy good, cant wait for the next chapter
obackbarama chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
THIS IS A GREAT START TO A STORY! A few tips tho...

The chapter is a bit short, not that I'm any better, but y'know, thats just me.

And secondly...YOU SHOULD MAKE THIS A FULL-BLOWN CHAPTER STORY! YAYAYAYYYY!
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