Reviews for Unexpected meetings
arrr chapter 3 . 9/6/2011
Good morning! That was a nice way to start the day!

I loved the delicate way you handled J losing his "card" - nicely done. AND THANK YOU for NOT going with the typical "I licked his lip, requesting entrance" - finally something different!

And loved the last line - I would not want to answer to him - I think we know who the alpha is in the trio!

Best ~ A
Just a Girl INACTIVE chapter 3 . 9/6/2011
God, Paul is incredibly hot in that last part. Like really hot, with his demanding question and fiery temperature.

Ahh, Jared finally lost his virginity to Bella. Wasn't that sweet in their own little moment, how very cute!

I liked this chapter, but Bella, can't leave. Oh no, they're her soul mates and she needs to stay with them!

I hope Paul has something exciting in store for her, to make her stay!

Oh, so excited for the next chapter!
goldfishie1 chapter 3 . 9/6/2011
Damn! That was hot! Hot wolf boys making me melt into a big puddle! Can't wait for more!
AccountKiller6189 chapter 3 . 9/5/2011
Woo! Jared! Virgin no longer! xD

And that was close. Good thing Paul was there to stop Bella before she left.
doritotasticwizard chapter 3 . 9/5/2011
Okay. I LOVE this story. Please update as soon as possible because I think this is my new favorite. I'm pretty sure this hasn't been done ever before and I love it. You are an amazing writer working with a great plot, and I am definitely feeling the personalities of the way the characters in the book in this story. I love it, keep writing and I'm very much looking forward to the next update! XD ~K
twilight addit14 chapter 3 . 9/5/2011
gahh! so good! longer chapters please and update soon!
rmcrms5 chapter 3 . 9/5/2011
Time to learn to trust.
fallunder chapter 3 . 9/5/2011
loved it
Venetiangrl92 chapter 3 . 9/5/2011
great chapter! paul had better not let her leave! please please update soon! xoxo
Raven's twimom chapter 3 . 9/5/2011
Well its seems Bella doesn't understand the meaning of an Imprint! I wonder if Paul will explain it better. MMMMM!
kamikazee.doll chapter 3 . 9/5/2011
Tormented soul isnt she, hopefully Jared AND Paul can make her see that she can lean on them and stop being so selfless.
Kathy Hiester chapter 3 . 9/5/2011
Great chapter!
KareBear1965 chapter 3 . 9/5/2011
I loved this chapter and I so look forward to more a hot poly with two of the hotest wolves you rock.

twimama77 chapter 3 . 9/5/2011
Very very awesome
notashamedtobe chapter 3 . 9/5/2011
Totally loved it :) And yummy yummy angry Paul
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