|Reviews for Unexpected meetings|
| teamhotmen chapter 2 . 9/4/2011
i have just found this story and have enjoyed it keep it going
| Sams Taz chapter 2 . 9/2/2011
Love it, love it, love it. Praise for your writing talent! ;-)
| fallunder chapter 2 . 9/2/2011
| notashamedtobe chapter 2 . 9/2/2011
Well that was wcked fucking sexy! Yummy
| AelsiaA chapter 2 . 9/1/2011
Love it. I wanna know what they are going to do about Victoria, so please update soon.
| Simaril chapter 2 . 9/1/2011
I flove you too.
| Christobel Cullen chapter 2 . 9/1/2011
Very good writing. I found myself really liking Jared and his inexperience. It's a good contrast to Paul's experience. Wondering where you're going to take this story, but no doubt, it's definitely INTERESTING. Will Jared and Paul hook up?
| iJeedai chapter 2 . 9/1/2011
Loved it! Hope they're able to change Jared's status soon.. xD
| darinka chapter 2 . 9/1/2011
Stil love the story glad to know that youre going to continue it past the 5chapters i already read. Thanks for the message telling me where to find it again.
Hope you pdate again soon
| Augustmoon99 chapter 2 . 9/1/2011
My interest was piqued that you had Embry imprinted. I'm curious to see who you matched him with. I like that you acknowleged Kim, even if she isn't going to play a part in the story.
You are making me love Jared with his insecurities and feeling like he won't match up to Paul. It will be interesting to see how they all balance each other out. I like that you had Paul and Bella's kiss from the JPOV. It was nice to see it from a different perspective, and you wrote it so hot! ;) I'm glad there is no jealousy from him, not that I thought there would be since this is a poly story, but still you left it up as a possibility. :) You had me laughing at the mischevious Bella. I like how she was so sensitive, yet provacative at the same time, when she asked Jared if she wanted to change his virginity status. Commanding Paul was SO SEXY! Yummy. I like that you didn't go all the way in this chapter..though you definitely went far enough. ;) It leaves more for next time, and a sex marathon after just meeting might not have the same meaning to all of them. Loved the foot rubbing detail at the end. It was nice to see a sweeter side of Paul. So excited to see what you do next! Til then. :)
Congrats on the nom! You deserve it.
| twimama77 chapter 2 . 8/31/2011
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| Venetiangrl92 chapter 2 . 8/31/2011
please update soon! i love it! even though charlies dead...xoxo
| arrr chapter 2 . 8/31/2011
Hiya - love your a/n and your beta not being comfortable..tee hee hee!
I was thrown with JPOV b/c I naturally thought JASPER but then after my blonde moment was over I realized it was Jared (DUH). And I appreciate your foresight b/c I kept thinking "guess there is no Kim or Rebecca".
And, uh, can you imagine being a "good boy" and find out you have to share your imprint with Paul? Poor guy - he's probably gonna be a bit insecure! And right after I wrote that I read "The thing that scared me was that Paul also had imprinted on her. How would I ever measure up to him?" Am I gonna have to put a WARD after your name for reading my mind too?
Really like P being sensitive to J! Great way to wind down on my birthday - thanks K!
| Vendell chapter 2 . 8/31/2011
Really thought that Bella was going to try to fight the imprint, glad to see that she's all kinds of ok with it.
Damn that was hawt with Paul being all demanding.