Reviews for Umeda, Yuki
Zapwing chapter 4 . 11/12/2011
Listen, I don't want to cause any offense or anything, but your OC is turning out to be a humonguous Mary Sue. I don't think Repton,or any of the raptors would even accept her in his home anyway; he'd probably eat her or something.

Just saying. Hoping you improve on this.

Oh, and be sure to review some of my stories. There shall be free muffins if you do!

Your pal,

Zapwing.