|Reviews for Umeda, Yuki|
| Zapwing chapter 4 . 11/12/2011
Listen, I don't want to cause any offense or anything, but your OC is turning out to be a humonguous Mary Sue. I don't think Repton,or any of the raptors would even accept her in his home anyway; he'd probably eat her or something.
Just saying. Hoping you improve on this.
Oh, and be sure to review some of my stories. There shall be free muffins if you do!