|Reviews for Finding a Home|
| moellerman chapter 4 . 4/4/2013
It is a good chapter but there is one thing that could make it better, (not that it NEEDS it). When Dani whisper "Thank you" to Maddie you could have added: I looked up upon on her face and said quitely, "mom".
| Reyow chapter 3 . 11/13/2012
i really like find fanfic like this one. ones that make some sence to finish up loose ends. like dani here i always wondered what happend to her
| Reyow chapter 2 . 11/13/2012
i think this is really cool so far :)
| rana2001 chapter 5 . 10/1/2012
No, thank YOU for making it. I truly enjoyed it, and it brought a smile on my face.
| rana2001 chapter 3 . 10/1/2012
| rana2001 chapter 2 . 10/1/2012
I have no idea how Maddie will react. How would I react if some cute little girl that looks like my son came to me and said that she was his clone?
On to the next chapter!
| IceDragon19 chapter 5 . 6/27/2012
Wow, this was such a good story! I can't believe it was your first! I especially loved the last chapter, how Dani was graduating and looking on her past after she had made the choice to live with Danny... Definitely one of my favorite stories!
| Music179 chapter 5 . 3/15/2012
I loved this, It was so sweet! :)
| DracoDreams-2 chapter 5 . 11/7/2011
Nice story you have some good ideas keep up the good work
| Phantom-Stelo chapter 5 . 11/6/2011
This was an awesome story. See you next story!
| VampireFrootloopsRule chapter 5 . 11/6/2011
Aw. Cute little bonding moment. I like the dXd bonding stuff, and u wrote it very well
| sapphireswimming chapter 5 . 11/6/2011
Really nice ending. It was far enough in the future that we were able to see a little about what life had been like with Dani and how well she had been accepted into the Fenton family, but nothing had really changed, even though everyone had graduated.
I especially liked the two flashback scenes. :)
There were a couple typos and misspellings here and there, but nothing major.
And such a cute and definitive way to wrap everything up. It worked really well, I think. ;)
| aslan333 chapter 5 . 11/6/2011
| Evil.VS.Waffles chapter 5 . 11/6/2011
YAY! This was so cute, probably my favorite chapter. Great job at capturing the brother and sister relationship of Danny and Dani. I don't think there's enough of that. :) Again, I loved it!
| Christopher Scott chapter 4 . 10/27/2011
Nicely done. I enjoyed reading this , Christopher Scott: A Gentleman Thief