Reviews for Journey to the Center of Ash
The Fighter chapter 7 . 1/27
way too OOC for my tastes, but I realize you're trying to follow a pre-existing story.
Grov.light chapter 7 . 11/16/2016
As much as this sounds weird, I like this sort of thing of a person shrinking and then being eaten whole alive. Good job on this one.
Andrew S. Beatty chapter 7 . 11/1/2015
im not gonna lie... i loves the story, it was a little shorter than expected, but i enjoyed. Granted there was in my opinion a few things that i do believe was out of character in a few chapters. but over all im happy with it. but the biggest crime was not bringing up that machine again that acted as the main source of transportation in this story. you could say you kinda left a dead end or a cliff hanger that could have provided a unique twist. like every things okay, but then Ash feels something with him internally and that bring up that question... where that ship now and what could it possibly be doing to Ash. but other than that... Good job
Guest chapter 7 . 8/13/2015
Amazing story! I LOVE those types of stories about shrinkage so I think you should totally make more. Especially when it's related to pokemon because its a lot more fun to read. I don't know about you but out of all the pokemon episodes there is, I only know 2 episodes that include shrinkage and I'm so into shrinkage so they should make more episodes on that topic.
Guest chapter 7 . 8/13/2015
Amazing story! I really like those types of stories about shrinkage so you should totally make more. Espec
katelin. blossom chapter 7 . 1/13/2013
ash sneezes
Bluemew919 chapter 7 . 9/23/2011
im surprised that i wasnt grossed out by this. this stuff will probably actually help me for my anatomy physiology class. lol. it was still good despite the circumstances of where t took place. lol.
ShesTypeDopex3 chapter 7 . 9/11/2011
I loved it. It was perfect! I liked how it actually felt like a REAL episode. And that Phineas & Ferb part, priceless! Six stars out of five.
Lil Jengi chapter 7 . 9/6/2011
That must have been quite a long shower...
OMNISENSE95 chapter 6 . 9/4/2011
You couldn't simply use the old pepper tickle, could you?
Lil Jengi chapter 6 . 9/3/2011
Surprisingly, I didn't throw up! :)

LOL well they made it out at least...
Miyuku-chan chapter 6 . 9/3/2011
Just one thing... EW

It was very... detailed though '

Yeah... So Update?
Lil Jengi chapter 5 . 9/2/2011

I started to crack up ever since Ash acted like Phineas. THAT WAS SO FUNNY! AGGGHHHH!

And I hope they aren't where I think they are...

Miyuku-chan chapter 5 . 9/2/2011

OMNISENSE95 chapter 5 . 9/2/2011
The nose?
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