|Reviews for Harry the Hufflepuff 2|
| madbrad chapter 2 . 9/10/2011
I liked the idea of the broom powering the bicycle. I'd come across that idea aeons ago with a science fiction short story that did the same thing; a broom lashed to a glider to provide extra lift.
Throughout this story I had flashbacks to your one-shot of Harry spending a few weeks in Diagon Alley - meeting Luna in the process - excellent humour that one, by the way. Anyway, so loud cheers when he came across Luna again, even if it was in the train. I was in the right mood for Harry/Luna eccentricity. Now all we needed was a goblin guard, I thought ... so I almost choked when Lockhart mentioned the idea. Hee! :-)
Why is Harry making Larry anyway? Is that something I've missed? I've totally forgotten.
I loved the happy!Hermione segment. Funny, and nice to see that you had her bright enough - and young girl happy enough - to find a variant of 'nagging' that would work with both Harry and we readers.
I'm going to enjoy this story, because, you see, Harry will certainly be TOO LAZY to go to all the exertion of, for instance, saving a stalker from CERTAIN DOOM. So I'm therefore looking forward to the DEMISE OF GINNY, bwa-ha-ha!
| Sunny chapter 2 . 9/10/2011
Do so love your humor! Harry the 'Puff is so funny. :)
| csibpip chapter 2 . 9/10/2011
Ahhhh... I love you... just Freakin awesome!
| Cassandra30 chapter 2 . 9/9/2011
| Rorschach's Blot chapter 2 . 9/9/2011
Another winner. From the House Elf Pit fights to Harry's new mentor to the last couple lines. Brilliant.
| accidentalsuperhero chapter 2 . 9/9/2011
| Isis36 chapter 2 . 9/9/2011
I love your Harry. He cracks me up! The scene with the mandoline was awesome. Such a clever idea. I'd so take a mandoline over slicing, dicing and chopping by hand.
| Melverne chapter 2 . 9/9/2011
You really need to add a warning: Do not eat or drink while reading this story. I nearly choked I was laughing so hard. Harry's new mentor did not surprise me but your take on it was great. Luna's comments had me rolling especially what she had to say about Slick (I love that nickname for Draco). I want another Harry versus Snape scene. No surprise that charms is Harry's favorite. It caters to his laziness. There are just too many moments. I can't wait to see how you twist the other cannon scenes for Harry the Hufflepuff.
| musme chapter 2 . 9/9/2011
I love it!
| ranma hibiki chapter 2 . 9/9/2011
the scene with the basilisk "need to go on a diet" and the end where the missing spoon shows up were funny.
of course so was luna, but that goes without saying...she is just awesome like that!
so, should we be afraid for the rest of the students that harry is giving lockheart IDEAS! *sniggers*
keep up the good work, can't wait to see more...just so long as i don't have to see that spoon ever
| jully123 chapter 2 . 9/9/2011
Does Larry stand for lazy harry? :)
| FuzzyBoots chapter 2 . 9/9/2011
_ Very funny. And I heartily approve of the addition of Luna. She adds a bit of madcap nature to the mess. The amiable nature of Lockhart's and Harry's nature works well too. I hope to see more from you, but I understand how difficult it has to be to write a character who really doesn't want to do anything. Good luck, nonetheless.
| Wonderbee31 chapter 2 . 9/9/2011
It's so fun to see Harry here, and how he is able to make inroads in ways I wouldn't think, like getting to be much more tight with Lockhart here, and that Lockhart is able to actually sort of teach him in ways you wouldn't think at first. Looking forward to more of Harry talking with the other Puffs, and what might come of the final version of his mannequin there, along with hopefully he and Luna growing in their friendship.
| Nights Silhouette chapter 2 . 9/9/2011
I love this Harry, keep it up.
| Hammerchuckery chapter 2 . 9/9/2011
Please, expand upon the underground kitchen coliseum. Thanks again for another chapter BajaB!