Reviews for Danmark's Fødselsdag Gave
catnip1208 chapter 1 . 1/1
Hey this is awesome! I wish I could write that well! Love this couple they're so cute 3
cocoadaze chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
W-well that was pretty hot.
I have no words actually. It was well written and really really sexy.
Thanks for writing it :3
FrankinMaxxx chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
This is the best thigh i have ever read. no joke.
Ramen is Happiness chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
Wow... that was unbelievably smutty... but I enjoyed every word of it! You're a great writer! I love me a flustered Norway. Oh yes. Heheheheh.
BowlegsAreCool chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
So hot. Omg. Sexy as it is. Hot.
The Iridescent chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
this is the hottest den/nor fic i ever read!
asdfghjkl. i'm faving this.
Kuro Shiro Kami Chan chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
the longest yaoi i ever read... This'll help me sleep good tonight! thanks! Keep up the good work, thanks for teaching your readers Danish, and most importantly, thanks for featuring other couples! - Val
PipKax chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
Well, I'd love to help you with the danish, because I'm a dane, and not only that I'm from Copenhagen! A And that is also why I suck at english - sorry D: I'd really like to help 3
TheArtificialOxford chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
This deserves more reviews! I love DenNor and the pairing needs more love!
AmericanFangirl200 chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
i dont really have much to say about this fic except OMG! and XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD


LunaMorgana chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
I liked this story! :D very much!

ANd since im really bored I decided to correct your danish grammar errors ;b

Ja! Hvad synes du du laver? Ja! Hvad tror du, du har gang i?( The way you put it makes good sense, but a more correct way to put it is the way I just did.)

Komme nu norge Kom nu, Norge(Only one single grammar error, which I have no idea how to explain...)

Lad slip på mig Giv slip på mig! / Giv slip!(You can choos from these too options which is in english : Let go of me! / Let go!

Most danish people i believe would put it 'Giv slip' but i wouldn't know)

Denne samtale er slut. Jeg vil køre hjem. Du er fuld Denne samtale er slut! Jeg går hjem. Du er fuld.(Just a more simple to put it.. You wrote : I wonna drive home, but meant Im going home. That would me 'Jeg går hjem')

ah, du er så seriøse. Men det kan jeg godt lide ved dig. Åh, du er så alvorlig. Men det er det jeg godt kan lide ved dig.(This just matches the english sentence better.)

Jeg forstå ikk' Jeg forstår det ikke.(Grammar error)

Det er det ikke. Du ved, hvad jeg vil har fra dig Det er ikke det. Du ved hvad jeg vil have fra dig. (Grammar error)

"Du forstå, ikke? Hvis du vil ikke snakke dansk, så skal jeg snakke det til dig, og du skal høre hvad det er jeg vil siger Forstår du det ikke? Hvis du ikke vil snakke dansk til mig, taler jeg det bare til dig, og så bliver du nødt til at høre på hvad jeg siger. (And again, just a simple grammar error..)

If any of these explainations made any sense to you, its just great! If not, ask me and ill try again... xD

SwedishPancake chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
Oh lawdy~ I love you for this~ Good job! w
I-Love-Humans2 chapter 1 . 9/22/2011
lmao cutest DenNor i've ever read and it's nicely written~ *nosebleed* lol i didnt want to wait to see the translations at the end so I went on google translate XD and also your Danish seems correct ~
FlyingMintBunnies chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
Okay, I LOVED this! The only problem is the Danish, unless you go down to the bottom and see it (which I didn't know you put the translations until I finished it) it was kinda confusing. But apart from that, PERFECT!
Katti94 chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
I would have helped out with some of the Danish. Unfortenly I'm on the phone so can't really help right now :/

But the story was really good and fun to read :)
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