Reviews for Quiet GerIta FLUFF
burning-the-pigeons chapter 1 . 1/14
Yaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssss bby
LOL chapter 1 . 1/12
This is way too cute.
JustYasmin chapter 1 . 12/25/2015
Rated. For sure. Beautiful, anyways.
42 4ever chapter 1 . 10/25/2015
Advklllkjnvcfhrdrffrrbbbbbb. I'm dead. YOU KILLED ME WITH THIS! I CHOKED IN THE OVERLOAD OF FLUFF! But I liked it.
Ceruleanbeat04 chapter 1 . 10/12/2014
maaaaybe rated .
YAOIBELARUS chapter 1 . 1/14/2014
Awwwwww I ship Gerita soooooo hard. It makes me happy to read things like this *cries happily* If only my relationships were like this... *cries sadly* Italy: Don't cry please bella! *pats back while hugging* Me: Thanks feli! *giggles cutely*
Anonymous chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
Yup. That should definitely be rated m
Gerita fangirl x chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
Those teens who 'awwed' were me and my yaoi loving friends ;)
GoldenFeather chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
cute _
Tfish chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
Aww! I love them soo much! I think your rating is fine, because it's not like teens don't hear words like 'penis' at at chools, so I don't see the big deal. Anyway, I loved the store scene! The whole thing was beautifully crafted! Thank you :) 3
RavenTheHeartlessMaoh chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
KAWAIIIIIIII! Great job! So cuuuuuute!
u dont know me chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
cute! umm yes you should rate it M bc the word peinis is in it...ya
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
enoemos chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
It's cute, but I think it's a bit over T rating... Not necessarily M, more like something in between... Keep it T and put a warning or something, idk.

It's a little hard to tell which parts are present time and which are flashbacks, I think you should put pagebrakes or use italics for that.

And then one more thing, the last line should be "Goodnight, mein liebe" not leibe.

And now that I've gotten the critique out (btw, I hope I didn't offend you, I just want to help), I want to say I really liked the story, and it's very cute and they are all in character. Also I loved the bit with the teens in the store. Keep writing, I'd love to read more from you.
Gervana chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
gosh it's really awkward to read stuff like this lol
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