Reviews for First Beach Fiasco
Peyton-Marie-James chapter 2 . 9/1/2011
So far, I do NOT like Bella in this story... I actually don't mind Edward-weird coming from me-but Bella is driving me bonkers! Pick a man, woman! LOL Jacob and Charlie's conversation was awesome. It was so *them*. Their character traits were PERFECT.
bluebaby3296 chapter 2 . 9/1/2011
great ch! but ur missing a lot of " at the end of jakes sentences.
Tayla chapter 2 . 9/1/2011
PLEASE update
cdeadgrlsampson chapter 2 . 8/31/2011
Hahaha! Go Jake! I bet Charlie's face is going to turn a deep purple once he sees Bella's suit. I bet Bella is going to be embarrassed & ticked off that Jake spilled the beans on her kissing him. I wonder what shes going to say once she finds out that poor Jake was telling the truth. I can't wait to see what happens next.
NikkiB1973 chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
This was lol funny. Is this a one shot or are you making it into a series. I hope so. I like the way you write these two. Nikki.
Peyton-Marie-James chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
Wow, Bella toootally wasn't being a spoiled brat. *rolls eyes* Compare the differences? Geez, those are some pretty lenient guys! LOL I still love Jake, though. :)
cdeadgrlsampson chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
Hahaha. Cute. Poor Jake though. He was trying to do something nice for her.
littlemoon1324 chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
hee hee... MORE PLEASE :)
ladybug82896 chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
I liked it. It was cute and funny. Jake sure does have his work cut out for him though. Bella is really stubborn.
GByrd chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
Go on!
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