Reviews for Directors Cut
Michonyx chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
I do love a happy ending, one inside the other. Thank you for this sweet story. :)
Pyejammies chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
That was a sweet ending. How do the straight boys get hard enough to perform? Unless they bottom it must be difficult for them.
sessahhh chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
Lovely story. I hope this gives Emmett back some of mojo. It's sad that an attempt at fufilling your college dream without football was making him depressed. Great job with this story. That was some delicious hot dorm room sex. Good luck in the contest.
sasharose11 chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
I enjoyed this story. Very sad watching Emmett go through all these emotions and feeling so ashamed at the end. The man had some good friends trying to help him get through a difficult situation. Jasper was just lovely trying not to let the same thing that happened to him happen to Emmett.
Malice Slashlover chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
Poor Emmett, It would be really hard, Um... I mean difficult, to make porn if you weren't really excited by the idea. Professional or not, one thing a guy can't fake is arousal. It was a really interesting story. Good luck in the comp!
PuzzlePerfect9 chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
i really liked this a lot!

it was so tender and sweet

i'd definitely read more if you expanded it
prassacut chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
Really sweet!

It's a nice thing to have tried it without dialogue. Never saw a third pov with no dialogue, but it gave a sort of "fairytale" vibe to it, as they're often written or told with just a third pov voice.

Good luck, sweets!
shoefreak37 chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
Aw, this was really sweet in a different, porn-making kind of way. Lol. I'm glad Emmet doesn't have to make more movies. Jasper will be his sugar-daddy, right? Thanks for writing and best of luck in the contest.
Anonymous82215 chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Poor Em. I'm glad he connected with J but I hope he can also find an answer to his financial issues that he can be comfortable with and proud of. Good job. -ICM
sunystone chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Great story! I loved this Emmett.
JasperLuver48 chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
I love this Emmett! Good for him for wanting to pursue his education and give up football if he didn't love it!

I hate that he got sucked into the porn industry but am so thankful for Jasper being there and for Seth and Riley for helping him through it!

So glad that Em took a chance on Jasper and they had such chemistry! I'd def watch that production!
Jessypt chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
You wrote this in an intriguing way, almost narrative, and I really enjoyed it.

Thanks and best of luck.

Jess xoxo
Melooza chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
I would have not thought of this pairing but you did it well :)
Fr333bird chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
aww that was lovely. I felt sad for Emmett, so glad that Jasper made him feel better about himself again. Riley was cute too :)
gumibear26 chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
I never thought about 'gay for pay' actors. Interesting concept. I'm glad Emmett got his mojo bacfk. Sweet ending.
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