|Reviews for Clipped short|
| Tifaching chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
Ouch. I wonder where Mary did end up.
| Tribble Master chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
oh wow, good imagery in such few words. I like how you took the word with mary's regrets. i always thought it was shocking when i discovered she was a hunter. lovely use of the word. write on!
| MeAzrael chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
Oh, this is really dark my friend - and how I love a dark-minded muse from time to time! I can feel Mary having this kind of thoughts (probably forgetting about her own role in this play, but it's not as if you have much of a chance, raised as a hunter) - loved the hint on the names. Oh, and I owe you so many thanks for your glorious reviews - I'll catch up, promise (have had a holiday, thank all the Angels ;-)
| KatyMM chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
Yep, pretty bleak. So a nice job on the imagery.
| Swellison chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
You're right about the despair warning. Good use of the drabble word, and you certainly captured and expanded upon Mary's mood and actions that night.
| JenF chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
Very poignant and insightful. I like it - a lot.