Reviews for Rodrick Heffley Love Story
markergal chapter 1 . 12/17/2015
It has good promise, but just some little things need to be fixed. You really should format the dialogue so it's not one block of text. Also, with the spanish in the beginning, it seems like you just put it in google translate and copied that. Maybe you should have someone who is fluent in spanish look over it? I'm sure after some editing it can be an awesome story :)
audrey chapter 20 . 9/14/2014
u felt awkward writing when i felt awkward reading
Grammar Nazi chapter 1 . 8/17/2014
Your writing style is very choppy and redundant. I can't even read this.
WhoPotterLock1516 chapter 25 . 8/16/2013
you should do another story but use every single event that happened in each book and use the same people you used in this one! what do ya think? you're a very good writer i bet you can do it (when you have time of course).
angelina chapter 2 . 8/4/2013
i love rodrick he is really really reallly handsome
Guest chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
MyNameIsCrazy chapter 20 . 1/14/2013
Hahaha very sexy :)
KCKC chapter 19 . 1/13/2013
Maybe you should rate this M now...
MustacheGirl chapter 14 . 8/17/2012
Plz update soon
J Ma chapter 14 . 7/26/2012
This is awesome! Just a tip though, the links for outfits don't work for me, sooooo yeah. Other than that, this story is amazing and I really want to know what happens next. Good job!
P.s. I want to see the movie too! Got to love Rodrick... :)
KCKC chapter 14 . 7/26/2012
Again, I actually like this fanfic because I like the chemistry between them :)

but I have to give some helpful points:

EXPLAIN your outfits, because the links are not working.. Just look at the outfit and try to explain it.

and Maybe Jess shouldn't of forgave him so fast, that was too quick. But I guess it was your fanfic, but
continue writing :) Can't wait for Chapter 15.
Fry Philips chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
I thought it was dead good! go on with ch2
Kaitlyn chapter 13 . 6/21/2012
that is a very good story you should right more of it

thanks for writing the story its really good
tori.m chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
You should probably think about putting your story into paragraphs and not just a huge block of text. Also, proper formatting for dialogue is shown below:

Person A and Person B were talking,

"Words and clauses as well as sentences." said Person A

"I can say things with proper formatting." declared Person B as they proceeded to also correct grammar and spelling in order to make the world a better place.

The end
KCKC chapter 2 . 4/20/2012
Instead of sending links to what she is wearing, actually EXPLAIn in detail!

Also, put your story into paragraphs.

Interesting story anywho :)
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