Reviews for Completion
UntiedHeartbeat chapter 2 . 3/24
This is so cute. But I guess she'll freak the fuck out when she finds out what they are eating. I would too and act like it's nothing to survive. xD
Noonerz45 chapter 2 . 12/11/2014
Great story line! You should keep writing this one.
hermonine chapter 2 . 11/11/2013
nice start to the story
Cattra1992 chapter 2 . 4/20/2013
I really love it I can't wait to read more!
ShatteredAngelWings chapter 2 . 4/9/2013
I'm in love with this already! :3 I loved Tommy's reaction to her huggin him; he seems like a shy little boy.
Clap-trap chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
Really good first two chapters. Please update soon.
dog88 chapter 2 . 5/8/2012
:)Good story keep going ]
Sam0728 chapter 2 . 3/20/2012
Oh, wow. I really love this story, hope you continue it, update again soon! XD
PrincelyMerchant chapter 2 . 3/8/2012
its very good please would ya update this soon? its very very good

-Repo
tanakaL chapter 2 . 1/24/2012
Alright now that iv read the cjapters you have me hooked on this story so please update.
Secretly Evil chapter 2 . 12/13/2011
Tis so cute D: I hope to see a chapter three up soon!
mafiaB52 chapter 2 . 11/18/2011
keep gowing cnt wait

tew read da nxt chapta
TinyHearts chapter 2 . 10/23/2011
AHH more. :)

I'm loving it so far!
SpicyMiller chapter 2 . 10/23/2011
Great story, I like how you protray Tommy.
PureAngelEyes chapter 2 . 10/21/2011
good story i hope to read more real soon _
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