Reviews for Harry Potter and the Altered World
SuperVegitoFAN chapter 39 . 7/30/2014
OrgaNIsm... UHHH

HAH vomdy got loveowned loowned
SuperVegitoFAN chapter 28 . 7/30/2014
Just a fireball... bah
Great fire annihilation and blast wave wild dance are so much more awesome
SuperVegitoFAN chapter 22 . 7/30/2014
Lemon and big lipped alligator moment (i hope) goddamnit this isnt the insanely fast maturin ninja...

God im happy it was so mild but dear lord what the fak
SuperVegitoFAN chapter 12 . 7/30/2014
First hermione and shikamaru (didnt get the third)

NOW fleur, tonks... and HINATA?

oh i do so love crossovers... if i know of all franchises involved that is... same thing with crossover references since they are so rare...
SuperVegitoFAN chapter 11 . 7/30/2014
Well IS there any other prisons mentioned in harry potter aside from the dementor infested azkaban?

some fanfics use ministry detention cells, but that is all...

not the fanfic authors fault, and the premise (betrayed hero) isnt that bad, and i dont know of many other ways to utilize said premise.
SuperVegitoFAN chapter 3 . 7/30/2014
Wrong genre...

hah well the 2 implicated stories it... uh implicates are both manga with an anime as well...

so yeah.
Silent Angel chapter 13 . 7/29/2014
Ugh, I like the idea of this story so much, but the writing is... There are a lot of mistakes, so I can't go on. If you would please let me know though if you ever get a beta-reader? My email is Thanks!
Josh20 chapter 6 . 7/16/2014
I've just read chapter 6 and while this story has potential STOP WITH THE FREAKIN FLASHBACKS. Get rid of them! They jar the flow of the story and serve no purpose at all. Almost everyone who's reading this story has read the originals. They aren't NEEDED!
howmanyisthat chapter 37 . 7/6/2014
Damn, I was hoping Harry would take Magical Language so he could learn French and win over Fluer
Guest chapter 3 . 5/4/2014
Interesting, but I find it difficult to follow who is speaking at times
Guest chapter 43 . 3/10/2014
um Hera is the Goddess of Marriage thus she has never cheated on Zeus but Zeus sure as hell cheated on her and on begins her hatred for Hercules.
Mighty Pen 20 chapter 1 . 3/7/2014
The story' s premise sounds interesting. But, your english is mediocre at best and that seems to be holding it back. I would suggest a beta. Sorry! Oh, and full stops should be used after every sentence ends, just saying.
Guest chapter 24 . 3/4/2014
please for the love of all that is holy go through and delete every single Fin flashback you have we all know the books you repeating it back to me makes me want to beat you with a stick, you would have a much better story without the flashbacks or if you do use them write stuff we donot know years 17 to 32
Siggimondo chapter 24 . 2/26/2014
The twins know the wizarding 1000 years of death ?
Siggimondo chapter 14 . 2/26/2014
Ministry of Magic? More like Ministry of 'Mort (as in Voldemort, abbreviated to keep the abbreviation MoM).
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