Reviews for Harry Potter and the Altered World
DalkonCledwin chapter 23 . 11/3/2014
No... there is absolutely no bloody way that Hogwarts Castle was built in the late Roman era. I am putting my foot down. Structures of the sort that Hogwarts embodies don't begin appearing until the 1600's at the absolute earliest. J.K. Rowling screwed with history enough when she dated the castle to around the 9th Century Common Era. Place it in the late Roman Era, in Scotland and the castle should be a structure of wood resembling the Norse Log Churches, not stone. The closest thing the late Roman Era had to an actual fortification of that magnitude in Greater Britain was Hadrian's Wall.

God 1,000 Galleons or 8,000 dollars was bad enough, did you really have to give the Twins (and their paramours) 10,000,000 Galleons or roughly 80,000,000 dollars? Do you realize how devastating to the magical worlds sanity that is going to be? Their one dream is to put Zonko's out of business. With that kind of money they could BUY Zonko's outright.

Oh god, Kroot is a Kakashi clone isn't he?
DalkonCledwin chapter 22 . 11/3/2014
Madame Pince has obviously never encountered a Speed Reader before?

Seriously if people can read the entire freaking Bible (old and new testament combined) in a grand whopping total of 70 hours and 40 minutes (a little less than 3 days), then Hermione managing to read the books in the Hogwarts Library that fast should be of no surprise to anyone.

You horribly mutilated the word "Orgasmed"

Hermione should be 13 by this point in the school year, she was 12 after the month of September in her first year. So she should be feeling just as much of an increase in sexual proclivity as the Chaser Trio are...
DalkonCledwin chapter 20 . 11/3/2014
You are mixing up There, Their, and They're a lot in this fic.

What house in Hogwarts you belong to has absolutely no bearing on being able to speak Parseltongue. And only those descended through blood from someone else who could speak Parseltongue can actually speak the language. To date the only known family that could speak Parseltongue was the family of Salazar Slytherin, of which the only current person living who has any relation to that family is Tom Morvolo Riddle (aka Voldemort) the fact that Harry could speak the language could be associated with either inheriting the language via "right of conquest" when he defeated Voldemort, or solely because he had a Horcrux lodged in his skull.

Flint has absolutely no clue what he is dealing with... fast brooms can only help you so much when trying to defeat players with at least an extra decade of flying experience under their belt.
DalkonCledwin chapter 19 . 11/3/2014
God... A COMPETENT Lockehart? This can't be good.
DalkonCledwin chapter 16 . 11/3/2014
Luna always wore a tin foil hat... she just didn't know it yet. Though Moody himself wore a Tinfoil Platemail.
DalkonCledwin chapter 13 . 11/3/2014
Please tell me someone is going to suggest a Fidelius Charm with one of Harry's Soulbonded as the Secret Keeper for Potter Manor...
DalkonCledwin chapter 12 . 11/3/2014
those with the sneezes were: Fleur, 'Dora, and... Hinata Hyuga?
DalkonCledwin chapter 10 . 11/3/2014
Okay, when did they get soul bonded? that's interesting.
DalkonCledwin chapter 8 . 11/3/2014
god, Filch in your story is AWESOME!

Oh now, what is Ronfoy up to?
DalkonCledwin chapter 6 . 11/3/2014
Wait, is there a charm on the door to the Slytherin Common Room that denies entry to half-bloods and muggle-borns? If so then where is Tracy staying? Because she is a Half-Blood. Or at least she was in the original timeline.
DalkonCledwin chapter 4 . 11/3/2014
You know there are a few things that really unnerve me. And one of them is the idea that the stereotypical "Gentle Giant" can go apeshit on someone, much less actually managing to kill them...
DalkonCledwin chapter 2 . 11/3/2014
Why is getting rid of the scar horcrux a good thing? This means Harry is effectively as helpless as all the other students come the Chamber of Secrets opening...

Did you really just include Snarf from the Thundercats in your story? AWESOME!

Unless Hermione somehow DIDN'T end up as soul bonded to Harry, then a Dumb Hermione is unlikely given what you said about them regaining their memories.
DalkonCledwin chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
okay, so long as no one weird, like Ron, McGonagall, Sirius, Remus, and Dumbledore end up as soulbonded to Harry I think I am okay with this development XD
loot chapter 31 . 10/7/2014
Your a moron. Your flashbacks don't tell the story from Harrys side. You are just fingers retyping the books. Guess what Dumbarse we've all read the books. It painful and annoying to skip your stupid flashbacks. So I and hopefully everyone else will stop reading here
morcheller chapter 24 . 10/3/2014
The story started out very good but, for the last ten or so chapters has been leaving the Harmony universe and leaning into a Naruto story.
Finally, you have totally lost my interest with the Girl Scout cookie crap!
Too bad, I had higher hopes.
Goodbye
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