|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Altered World|
| Another anon chapter 12 . 1/6/2015
Americanism much? It should be "Happy Christmas" not "Merry Christmas." But otherwise, it's a good fic so far.
| TheLukeskywalker2 chapter 7 . 11/8/2014
Do you mind if I borrow the name Ronfoy when I try this challenge?
| DalkonCledwin chapter 47 . 11/4/2014
how would they manage to ban Muggle liquids from magical homes? As far as I am aware Water is about as Muggle as liquids get. And I am 100% certain that the human body requires a severe quantity of water to be able to function for an extended period of time.
| DalkonCledwin chapter 42 . 11/4/2014
that should be Nymphadora Lupin nee Tonks, not Tonks nee Lupin.
| DalkonCledwin chapter 41 . 11/4/2014
How is Harry even managing to get into the Girls Dormitory? I seem to recall the stairwell on the girls side being charmed to turn into a slide anytime a boy goes up those stairs...
| DalkonCledwin chapter 35 . 11/4/2014
Why is Lavender calling Ron "Draco"?
| DalkonCledwin chapter 34 . 11/4/2014
Jiraiya does indeed have interests in boys. Or at least in any boy who can turn into a nude chick on command.
| DalkonCledwin chapter 25 . 11/3/2014
okay, that Omake was awesome.
| DalkonCledwin chapter 24 . 11/3/2014
Why is Amelia (a British citizen) referencing the American currency when doing an currency conversion instead of the British Currency?
| DalkonCledwin chapter 23 . 11/3/2014
No... there is absolutely no bloody way that Hogwarts Castle was built in the late Roman era. I am putting my foot down. Structures of the sort that Hogwarts embodies don't begin appearing until the 1600's at the absolute earliest. J.K. Rowling screwed with history enough when she dated the castle to around the 9th Century Common Era. Place it in the late Roman Era, in Scotland and the castle should be a structure of wood resembling the Norse Log Churches, not stone. The closest thing the late Roman Era had to an actual fortification of that magnitude in Greater Britain was Hadrian's Wall.
God 1,000 Galleons or 8,000 dollars was bad enough, did you really have to give the Twins (and their paramours) 10,000,000 Galleons or roughly 80,000,000 dollars? Do you realize how devastating to the magical worlds sanity that is going to be? Their one dream is to put Zonko's out of business. With that kind of money they could BUY Zonko's outright.
Oh god, Kroot is a Kakashi clone isn't he?
| DalkonCledwin chapter 22 . 11/3/2014
Madame Pince has obviously never encountered a Speed Reader before?
Seriously if people can read the entire freaking Bible (old and new testament combined) in a grand whopping total of 70 hours and 40 minutes (a little less than 3 days), then Hermione managing to read the books in the Hogwarts Library that fast should be of no surprise to anyone.
You horribly mutilated the word "Orgasmed"
Hermione should be 13 by this point in the school year, she was 12 after the month of September in her first year. So she should be feeling just as much of an increase in sexual proclivity as the Chaser Trio are...
| DalkonCledwin chapter 20 . 11/3/2014
You are mixing up There, Their, and They're a lot in this fic.
What house in Hogwarts you belong to has absolutely no bearing on being able to speak Parseltongue. And only those descended through blood from someone else who could speak Parseltongue can actually speak the language. To date the only known family that could speak Parseltongue was the family of Salazar Slytherin, of which the only current person living who has any relation to that family is Tom Morvolo Riddle (aka Voldemort) the fact that Harry could speak the language could be associated with either inheriting the language via "right of conquest" when he defeated Voldemort, or solely because he had a Horcrux lodged in his skull.
Flint has absolutely no clue what he is dealing with... fast brooms can only help you so much when trying to defeat players with at least an extra decade of flying experience under their belt.
| DalkonCledwin chapter 19 . 11/3/2014
God... A COMPETENT Lockehart? This can't be good.
| DalkonCledwin chapter 16 . 11/3/2014
Luna always wore a tin foil hat... she just didn't know it yet. Though Moody himself wore a Tinfoil Platemail.
| DalkonCledwin chapter 13 . 11/3/2014
Please tell me someone is going to suggest a Fidelius Charm with one of Harry's Soulbonded as the Secret Keeper for Potter Manor...