|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Altered World|
| godzillahomer chapter 5 . 9/9/2011
I'd love to see a flashback to see how Taisune and Harry interacted
| loretta537 chapter 4 . 9/8/2011
this is a good story, i cant wait to see what will happen in this new world
| Lord Xantos A. Fowl chapter 4 . 9/8/2011
what's the situation with gin is she in the harem (what about gabbi i like her too and tonks but i didn't/don't think theyre in this) cause she wasn't in this chapter is she still a weasly or does she have her mum's family name
whatever you do don't bash her please
WARNING WARNING WARNING
THE REVIEW FROM THIS POINT ON GOES OFF INTO A TANGENT ABOUT HOW TO "PROPERLY" TORTURE THE DURSELIES (primarily physiological) IF YOUR SQUEAMISH THE POINT IS THAT DAPHNE WOULD PROBABLY BE MORE ORIGINAL
crutio man be more origional your bodie actually has a sort of pain threshold as in a limit to the total quantity of pain you can feel at one time (eg like when you bight your lip to reduce the quantity of pain somewhere else) your nerves just can't carry more than a certian quantity of stimuli and there is a further restriction on the quantity of main eachindividual nerve can carry and a diffrent kind of pain threshold (diffrent for each person probably pretty low for the pampered dureselys) that your brain will shut down to save you from the pain,, now even if we assume that the curse somehow keeps you awake and distributes the pain evenly to along each nerve to it's absolute maximum it is still a continuous pain of the same kind and the same intensity the whole time, your brain will eventually mute the pain to an extent due to a phenomena known as white noise, stating that any stimuli that goes on for an extended period of time will be ignored unless pointed out and focused on, and to an extent (roughly 30%) even then, examples include your air-conditioner your clothes, your hair, the temperature (to a lessor extent), the static on a tv (actually known as pure white noise), your tongue in your mouth, etc
and it completely ignores psychological torture (other than breaking your mind through shear trauma) which i believe to be the strongest of them all
how about inventing a spell to make you THINK you were drowning, or a swiching spell between your stomach and left lung (for a finisher at least as that one would be lethal) imposingly and humiliation them sectum sempra (the invisible sword thing) while telling them that this is what it felt like to you, anal rape (especially with a week tickling jinx at their other privates and/or very week lust potion for the humiliation of "their bodies betraying them), the very act of them being lucid enough to realize that it's magic being used on them would add an additional layer to the torture so you could add stuff that is blatantly magical like doing this while levitating (upside down from their ankles for example) make hot soup fly out of their nose, or tear ducts, or their urethrae(or in petunia's case her vagina) do all of this in the dark (possibly with the exception of random flashes of light from floating ball or something obviously magic very briefly) to dissonant them and make them fear and anticipate the next torture or blow
bind them (with conjured ropes either really rough or thin/invisible rope or magic in the dark in the air) and curse them so that they constantly feel things crawling all over them leave them like this (this is exempt from that white noise thing i was telling you ablut as as it moves) let the lard butts thin down for a while but have nutrients put directly in petunia's blood stream or anally (fluids in your butt go imeaditly to your blood and this way they are humiliated by having it there) so as to keep them from starving but making their bodies THINK their starving whenever you want to stop you could simply pull the plug and let them starve
to make even more effective make them smell really good food like bbq ribs Ichibahn, stir fry peanut grouper, whatever their favorite food is especially meat
there's also the brutally efficient/effective but underestimated/under-appreciated classic of orgasm denial anyone can build up a resistance/fight pain your body however is NOT built to handle pleasure especially without fulfillment mixing the occasional orgasem denial or humiliation session in with the usual pain discomfort sessions will make both of them much more useful
also all the while make the room either just a little bit too hot or too cold for their tastes alternating if you want
you could deny them sleep
you could deny the m proper restroom facilities
keep them naked (except make the men ware panties or something)
mix it up phicial torture, phyc torture, "pleasure" to keep them from getting used to it if you are going for long term
wow i had an over 3thousand word reply and
| animeman12 chapter 4 . 9/8/2011
so all of the girls have memories of the other time?
| azphxbrd chapter 4 . 9/7/2011
Good chapter,I have to apoligize for my last review about a certain statement I wrote.
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/7/2011
I hope ginny is one of harry's girls.
| naruhina fan chapter 4 . 9/7/2011
Another good one. So now five of Harry's 7 girls (or 14), have their future memories back. And already Harry has to deal with multiple PO'd women.
Seeing as the harem is the same as the one in Restored Legacy, here are my guesses for the harem: Hermione, Ginny, Luna, Daphne, Susan, Parvati, and Padma.
If I'm lucky and you're making the harem bigger, I hope for Astoria, Fleur, Gabrielle(Fleur's little sister if memory serves), Tracey Davis, Cho, and perhaps one of the Gryffindor Chasers.
Speaking of the Gryffindor Quidditch team, there's still a way for Harry to get on the team like before: just have Ron do everything Malfoy did, but with somebody else having the Remembrall since Neville doesn't seem to be like he was in canon.
That's all for now. Ja ne!
| BlackRoseFire chapter 4 . 9/7/2011
Awesome chapters. I can't wait until the next one. I love the new Draco. I can't wait to see what happens next.
| godzillahomer chapter 4 . 9/7/2011
wonder if the teachers are still the same
| Vukk chapter 4 . 9/7/2011
Only thing to top a harem or twins...twins in a harem?
| sertry chapter 4 . 9/6/2011
| traviswj chapter 4 . 9/6/2011
Crucio is legal in Zimbabwe? Excuse me, let me book my worst enemy and myself onto the next flight ...
great chapter :)
| Celexs Draconia chapter 4 . 9/6/2011
This is going to become even more entertaining. Excellent work.
| anotamous chapter 4 . 9/6/2011
I am willing to bet that Hagrid used the much more efficient torture method of beating the Dursleys to death with their own skulls. As for new creatures, try looking at alternate fantasy genera for ideas, I remember suggesting Ents from Lord of the Rings at one point in another fanfic of yours. Finally, I wonder how effective crucio is against someone who cannot feel physical pain (there is a name for such individuals, I just cannot think of what it is. You do a very good job at making purebloods hated. The only group more worthy of hate would be the Nazi's.
| loginanout chapter 4 . 9/6/2011
great chapter. I wonder if they are all already together or if they where good friends durning the war after the war