Reviews for Our Perfect World
Bushwah chapter 1 . 2/5/2014
Unreliable narrators are unreliable. :shudder: Very well done.
Hana1225 chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
Wonderful! It was a good read! :D
Link no Sou chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
Oh gosh, this is so beautiful, I just cried for like, 30 minutes because I just can read and read it again. Thank you for write a fanfic like this!
Atomic Lilith chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
All I can say is that you're awesome and I love you! Your sempei approves!
Devilis Kyuu chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
Beautifully written!
HyoukyoNoSora chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
I loved this! I was craving some yandere so my first thought was Byakuran, I thought I wouldn't find anything good, though. Well, now I see how wrong I was!

This is just perfect! How mental and over-controlling Byakuran is here, it just suits him so well. I could just see his face, his cold smile, while I read this.

But what I really loved the most was Shou-chan. Broken beyond repair, his soul and will to fight completly shattered... that's really the only way he could end up like! Especially like how he wakes up to throw up and how the things he said before (the ones in italics) are filled with winces of pain... makes me feel so sad for him!

And Byakuran's reaction to discovering his Shou-chan was broken was great. When he realised what he was doing (Byakuran's sanity is pretty broken too... such a dysfunctional pairing~! ) and how his Shou-chan was broken, I was really curious about what he was going to do... if he would no longer want Shouichi, if he would try to fix him, if he would let him go... but his selfish reaction was really the best and most suited!

I loved the feeling of this fanfiction. It was heartbreaking, how crazy and destroyed they were, and that's exactly how I think it would be! This was exactly, maybe even better than, what I was looking for.

Thank you for writing and sharing this! :D
xXxLoveLessVampirexXx chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
Gosh~ i love this.