Reviews for The Lost Warrior |
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![]() ![]() You need to choose a point of view. |
![]() ![]() ![]() he's blacking out too much if you're going to make him a wimp |
![]() ![]() ![]() you need to fix your Spanish it's toca de Eva not tocco |
![]() ![]() Hmm.. is this dead? I hope not but 3 years seems dead to me soo idk maybe the guy/girl idk will get back to it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please post more to this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job! When is the next chapter? I suspect a new meeting with renamon, she wanted information if I am not mistaken. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, the good old reflexes. Shooting is like biking, it does not forget. Good chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Personally I would have preferred closer ties with Renamon. I'm not sure appreciated Serena. Otherwise the story is interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice start. |
![]() ![]() Good sir I must inform you that you are a life saver i was planning on ending it all, but thanks to your story I've desided to stay. Please I beg you to keep working on the digimon story I love it. Ps. Please put a bit of romance with Hatch and Renamon. You're great, bye |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Damn. That was fast hope that need to write stays around. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter xD This story is what inspired me to write mine, please continue with the updates! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad ur back and already posting again :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() The amount of content that is relevant to my interests does not exceed my required dosage! |