Reviews for princes and princesses
Guest chapter 7 . 7/13
you make too many in-notes, it cuts the narration quite bad...
Guest chapter 6 . 7/13
-senpai suffix is never used in family, that is only a school or work thing. Did you mistake it for -neesan perhaps?
nenarica chapter 4 . 7/9
SIX MONTHS?!
You gotta be kidding, even six weeks would already be way long enough for travel. They must take a boat at some moment, and dont they have Rapidash to ride or something? People in pokeworld have ride many diferent species.
nenarica chapter 2 . 7/8
I will read this only for the Haughty, there is almost no fics about that pairing...
nenarica chapter 1 . 7/8
I would choose Wally over Emerald any day. I hate the rude midget :(
gaminglizard chapter 11 . 6/16
You're doing an amazing job on this story but there are a few grammatical errors here and there but it's still understandable and very well written, thanks for this great story and I hope to see more
I love Eevees chapter 7 . 11/30/2015
Platina had bad grammar. Me and my sisters? Also please use " and "! Thanks
pokemon chapter 11 . 12/25/2014
cool
MiniManiMega chapter 11 . 11/15/2014
Make them all go to the beach and make some very funny events happen! Especially with Gold and Crystal ... DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUN!
julien chapter 11 . 11/11/2014
Pls more
Kuroi chapter 11 . 9/18/2014
YOU CANT PRESS ANY OF THE LINKS!
MangaReader chapter 11 . 8/15/2014
i like it but if only u update faster
Guest chapter 8 . 2/21/2014
where is the next chapter? what happen next? I can wait
pokefan chapter 11 . 1/15/2014
continue it faster! im so excited i cant wait to see whats nxt!
ElectricTiger chapter 11 . 12/27/2013
Great chapter as always AoiSlayer. The story is excellently set up so far. You've managed to keep me hooked. The suspense is perfect as i'm tearing myself over what I think will happen. The grammar and spelling can be better, but it doesn't detract from the flow of the story. solid 4.5/5.
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