Reviews for Treehouses and Hot Chocolate
Meepyonnee chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
Two words. Wild. Giggling. That about sums up my first yaoi experience.

Dude. That was.. um... I don't really know what to say. Your writing is great! Very.. uh descriptive, and wow. It's like I'm intruding their moment by reading this.

I seriously thought about reading this long and hard. I'm currently playing the game and reading this might change my views on the characters. And change they did. Damn.

Just so you know, I am a very avid MilesxFranziska fan. I haven't visited your page so I really really hope you have a fic about them . If not, PLEASE DO.
Rueskatniss chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
Omg, I laughed so hard at the ending!
LyriaBlackFrost chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
So perfect! *-*
I'm in love with your fanfic, it's so sweet, and cute, and amazing! Aww, the prologue was so innocent, I loved the idea of the first kiss (thanks, Larry xD), and their reaction... How can anything be more cute than that?!
And the way they showed their feelings for each other after all those years... So beautiful. I also loved how both of them had the initiative, because that's how I imagine them, and it's kinda hard to find fanfics that describe them like that.
So, I really loved this. I wanted to say more about how much I liked it, but my english is kinda bad, and so is my "comment ability". But, anyway, thanks for the amazingly perfect and cute story. You're a great writer. x3
bonnyblew chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
this. was. perfect. thank you so much, you made my fucking day! beautiful *tears of pure bliss*
PerilsofRosella chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
I'm addicted! This may be my favorite story of yours- the build-up is excellent. You always balance the sweet and the erotic so well. I can see this Phoenix and Miles living happily together many years in the future. : )
kituse-demon chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
I absolutely love your story! I loved your style of writing and how you potrayed all of the caracters really effectively. It was so cute, innocent and really hot... *fangirls*
xXxSexyUnicornxXx chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
OMG such a great ending! So good!
CatMuto chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
The epilogue was just adorably funny.

C-A
KokoKitsune chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Oh my god. That was fucktastic. One of the best pxe Ive ever read. Amazing.
HeroineCruor chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
Excellent story! I'm not a fan of this couple or any couples at all from the game, and especially this one is really new to me and always make me blush...
Anyway, it was well written and a very good storyline. Also a few times made me laugh XD
Keep up the good work! :)
Lady Monochromic chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
May I just love you for writing this!

Honestly I loved it from the beginning to the end. The prologue had such innocence and Larry's mischief. I just loved how you wrote Larry it made me chuckle on various parts. In fact all your portrayal of character was spot on! II always look for that in a story and I usually stop reading if they are out of character. But you did them well. Especially the interaction between Miles and Phoenix!

You have a great writing style that I enjoyed reading in fact in this one! It made me laugh and made me squeal for my OTP! Beginning to end perfect.
Miss Pessimistic chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
THIS WAS SO PERFECT. YOU'RE SO AMAZING, YOU DON'T KNOW IT BUT I THINK YOU ARE BRILLIANT. rsjtijrteitjrkfd'y09i64potdxlk0i4owpk8fdsx/ -spazzdies-

Why can't I marry fanfictions? Q.Q

From START TO FINISH, its merit cannot be defined! God. I need a love option for FF. It needs to be

Favoriting so I don't forget them.

Favoriting because it was so cute and I feel obligated.

Then it's

Favoriting because you plan on marrying that story.

No, but really, this has absolutely got to be my favorite fanfiction story I've ever read, and I've been pretty MIA for a while so this was just... 94wiutrsokgfgre56354trdf. THE ENDING. TREE. -flails and dies-

You're so cool, just know that. Just know that. Brilliant job.
WishMaker7 chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
This... is SO CUTE! :3

No other words can describe this.

Well... maybe sexy too...
Kiriahtan chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
I really love this. Aside from the fact that this's absolutely well written... the idea... everything is great. I could no express it in word, sorry _ You could be pround! Seriously.

I need to say... english is not my matter lenguaje, I'm spanish. So I wonder if you don't might if I traslate this into spanish. With credits, of course. The spanish fandom... duh... it's too tiny and all is Miles/Franzy or Phoenix/Maya (WTF? srsl? it's obvious!).

I hope your answer! Thanks again.
schlo5398 chapter 1 . 3/15/2012
I'm not a huge fan of the really intense scenes like that, however, I loved the actual story you incorporated into this. A lot of people usually just throw them together without any lead up to it and you definitely did not do that. This may be one of my all time favorite fan fics! Thank you so much for this!

And I loved the childhood story and Larry at the end made me laugh :D
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